Love Song

I love you so much

I am a  splattered mess on the floor,

waiting for strong gentle hands to whisk me away.

I love you so much

I want to shower you with everything I have

like Santa Claus at Christmas delivering toys across the sky.

I love you so much

I am obliterated with hope that every good thing will come your way.

I love you so much

so much

so much

that the spaces in my heart jump for joy at their happy completion.

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◄ Trust & Renewal

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Hélène

Fri 3rd Feb 2023 12:32

Thanks everyone for the likes & comments! I thought this poem was a bit odd but thought I'd post it anyways because why not. Re your comment Uilleam, I ask myself can an empty space jump? I have no idea; a question for the quantum physicists. That's one of the things I love about poetry; it doesn't have to be factually accurate. I worked as a legal researcher & writer where factual accuracy was paramount ; I've been liberated in retirement. Creative fun! Thanks again all for your encouragement.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 3rd Feb 2023 07:32

I'm intrigued by those "spaces" jumping for joy.😏💐

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 2nd Feb 2023 21:24

A wonderful conclusion, Hélène.

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