PRESSING MATTERS

There's an intimacy here

of tyres on gravel,

one must be ready for arrivals

but most episodes come to nothing

then the ignoring silence is complete.

 

Your chair still supports you

in its jacket of dull brown leather

no news in the lane today

nor any other day and yet

the sound persists, a memory

of wide sweeps on country house drives

a sad lament of murders in libraries.

 

You thought you'd nodded off

somehow losing track of time

it must be the sound of tyres on gravel

pressing lightly on the bed of your dreams. 

◄ TAKING STEPS

NO GRAFFITI NEFERTITI(A TALE OF THE SMALLEST ROOM) ►

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raypool

Wed 9th Jul 2025 10:46

Thank you all so much for the likes on this one. Much appreciated.


HI Stephen. Yes there is a reflective quality I tried to show, basically I just liked the tyres on gravel idea and worked the poem around it. It was more of a meander than a message!
Thanks for your thoughts. I do often nod off to endless unfathomable crime plots.

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 6th Jul 2025 10:00

Lots of ways to interpret this, Ray. A sense of looking back as the end approaches?

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