ARRIVAL OF CONCRETE

ARRIVAL OF CONCRETE

The old woman pottered

in a coal-dark house

with an inscrutable history 

from before our time;

she'd shout at kids

who messed in the meadow.

 

Buttercups and poppies

scattered colour

across that wild expanse

where dock leaves

apparently cured nettle stings

and the travellers said

the field contained

cures for most ailments.

 

Trespassing, we played games

in the cornfield opposite

all mad with summer

but in time, the woman died

and her crumbling house

became a car park

while in the cornfield

five hundred new houses.

 

The Fig Tree 9. June 2025, Editor Tim Fellows

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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john short

Tue 29th Jul 2025 11:48

Hi Stephen

Yes you're right. Time indeed passes whether we like it or not. And generally, in my experience, things get worse. Sorry if that sounds very pessimistic.

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john short

Mon 14th Jul 2025 10:32

Thanks for your positive comments guys. Sadly it's too easy to pour concrete over the world, mostly in the pursuit of profit.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 13th Jul 2025 09:19

Very impressive poem, John. Something here about memories and the passing of time, whether we like it or not.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 12th Jul 2025 20:14

Thanks, John.
The fragility and beauty of the poppy (such as those I see in the middle of the busy roadside reservation) is such a contrast to the unforgiving ugliness of the world of concrete.
A beauty so easy to destroy, and so difficult to replace.💐

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