an orchard’s lament

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Morning mist drapes each blossom  
like a bride reluctant to wake.  
Petals fall in silent confession—  
memory’s hush in every drift.  

Roots hold secrets of laughter and tears,  
a debt of seasons owed to shadows.  
Soon, steel will bite bark and bloom  
and these ghosts will scatter on the wind.  




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Red Brick Keshner

Tue 15th Jul 2025 12:05

Thank you @Graham Sherwood 🌷🕊🙏🏻As always, your feedback is much valued and greatly appreciated. RBK

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 15th Jul 2025 06:31

Your best yet in my opinion. Lines 2 and 6 I wish I had written! Bravo!

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