My Heavy Head is Drunk Again
My heavy head is drunk again.
My lines unclear like this.
Caught between this terrible beauty
And my fearful abyss.
The thin, blue line of my cigarette
Spills verse with trembling hands.
The flicked grey ash tumbles out
Thoughts on an empty page.
I write inside a drunken arc,
Each sip a skipped regret.
I chase each line through static fog,
That drinks itself again.
I write and knock my empty glass
Over unfinished lines.
I rest my brow. My bleary eyes
Close me into sleep.
Tim Daly
Thu 24th Jul 2025 16:16
Cheers guys, appreciate the comments and the feedback. I was a little unsure about this one, because I did think that could come over as a little pretentious.
Glad you liked it.