My Heavy Head is Drunk Again

My heavy head is drunk again.
My lines unclear like this.
Caught between this terrible beauty
And my fearful abyss.

The thin, blue line of my cigarette
Spills verse with trembling hands.
The flicked grey ash tumbles out 
Thoughts on an empty page.

I write inside a drunken arc,
Each sip a skipped regret.
I chase each line through static fog, 
That drinks itself again.

I write and knock my empty glass
Over unfinished lines.
I rest my brow. My bleary eyes
Close me into sleep.

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Comments

Tim Daly

Thu 24th Jul 2025 16:16

Cheers guys, appreciate the comments and the feedback. I was a little unsure about this one, because I did think that could come over as a little pretentious.

Glad you liked it.

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Rolph David

Thu 24th Jul 2025 07:58

Good morning Tim,
Your poem truly captures the frustration of battling that foggy, restless state where creativity slips just out of reach. I know it soooo well! I felt the weight of the “heavy head” and the struggle with the empty page—the quiet self-sabotage that so many artists know too well. Your words bring that internal conflict vividly to life, making it feel real and shared. Thank you for writing something so honest and relatable.

Regards,
Rolph

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 23rd Jul 2025 09:47

Although I’ve never had so much as an A4 of my writing published, I have to admit to moments when I’ve imagined myself as some kind of alco-pickled Dylan Thomas, scribbling away in his hermit’s den.

A couple of glasses of the old Uisce Beatha - Irish Whiskey only get me as far as Fantasy Island, after that, the “law of diminishing returns” always comes into force!
Sláinte, agus go scríobha tú, Tim!😉
Cheers and may you keep on writing.
(I think I got that right?)

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 23rd Jul 2025 08:46

The creative process comes at a cost, Tim. Like all good poetry, this enables us to enter a world that most of us can only imagine. Enjoyed it very much.

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