Longing

In the vast, dim canvas of the sky,
the moon perches,
like a night-blooming flower unfolding
in the darkness. It says nothing,
yet its glow reaches anyone who dares to look.

The stars flicker,
like quiet secrets dancing to a slow rhythm,
igniting hope
in the folds of the dark.
And in that soft light,
I try to sketch you.

You,
who were once a hope I could hold.

For a moment,
I let my guard down.
I allow myself to feel
the ache of longing.

Within four walls,
I barely dare to wonder:
Do you still look at the moon the way I do?

◄ The Sun and Its Promise

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Yanma Hidayah

Thu 7th Aug 2025 16:04

Thank you for your beautiful words, Rolph!
You never seem to lose the right words when it comes to interpreting poetry, I deeply respect and admire that.
The way you captured the atmosphere and emotion of the piece makes me feel truly seen as a writer.
Your reflection means more than you know.
Thank you for reading with such care.

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Rolph David

Thu 7th Aug 2025 06:52

Good morning Yanma,
Truly a touching and evocative piece.
The imagery of the moon as a night-blooming flower and the stars as secret dancers creates such a peaceful yet poignant atmosphere. It feels like a gentle conversation between the heart and the vast sky — full of hope, memory, and a deep yearning. I love how the poem explores the delicate vulnerability of longing without losing its quiet strength.
Regards,
Rolph

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Yanma Hidayah

Thu 7th Aug 2025 00:01

Hi Leon, thank you so much.

LEON STOLGARD

Wed 6th Aug 2025 17:48

Hi Yanma. Such a wonderful piece of writing. Thank you.


Kind regards.


Leon

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