cleverly shunned

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cleverly shunned
this clever lad
who once was
quite celebrated
applauded, even; 
that once and
clever tyke —


little did he know
one forward day
when he'd've all
up and grown
dependable lads 
are what's wanted


clever 'uns were


interesting enough
for a bit of a larf but
just a tad annoying;
when things gotta
be done — go figure
dependability and

cleverness could
be so incompatible 
in people's heads;
so be rather dull
but trustworthy 
than yip yap like a pup
that's cleverly shunned

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 10th Aug 2025 08:26

A wry, quietly cutting reflection on how the very traits that once drew applause can, over time, become a reason for distance. "Cleverly Shunned" sketches the arc from lauded wit to sidelined observer, asking (without quite answering) what we value when cleverness and dependability don’t seem to mix. Hope this airing provides true enjoyment and ponderings

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 10th Aug 2025 08:21

Dear Cynthia, thank you so much for picking up on lost time. Now it is my turn. Apologies for the 7-year silence, yet again. It is I and have been battling to stay online and present for poetry and poetry enthusiasts. As always, thank you for the attention that has been so properly accorded. And again, apologies. 🌷🌷🌷🙏🏻🕊️ Frederick Kesner

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 5th Mar 2018 10:37

This is so clever- deserved three readings before I was happy with my giving it proper attention.

Haven't seen you in ages. I hope all is well. Or am I wrong? I could have sworn I recognised the name from years ago. But your profile does not seem to bear this out.

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