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trevor homer

Mon 25th Feb 2019 13:14

Hi Keith - many thanks for your kind remarks re: Distant Time. I sense a kindred spirit.

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John Marks

Mon 25th Feb 2019 13:07

Thanks Kealan, I will follow the two suggested routes. We never know where we're heading, do we? I've been reading your work. You're a gifted writer. Thanks again for dropping by. John

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 12:33

Gorgeous

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 12:22

It's a poem of Hope. I'm glad I came across it. Beautiful Cynthia.

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keith jeffries

Mon 25th Feb 2019 12:14

Cynthia,

This is a poem to lift hearts as it brims with joy and optimism. My garden resembles your description yet I am fearful of cutting the lawn as I might damage the snowdrops and crocuses which have all come to life and add such colour.

I hope all goes well for you
Keith

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 25th Feb 2019 11:57

I know it's the tail end of the month, but that's OK. I have a moment to share today, and maybe not four days from now.

I have a huge 'thumbs up' from the Christie operation, three or four more chemo sessions for unseeable cancer cells, and regular checks thereafter. I am a blessed lady.

And I'm still writing. Hallelujah!

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 11:25

"in the blue- greeen meadow,
of my silent soul"

What a beautiful opening line, it immediatly calms and sooths, then to end with -

"for the aching world to behold it's beauty"

I feel both soothed and saddend.

It is an 'achingly' beautiful poem.

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 25th Feb 2019 11:07

Hi Sofia, thanks for liking, "Show Me A Saint," it's really appreciated. Love your sample, and have started reading through your others. Really like them. Will come and read some more when I get chance.

J.?

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Feb 2019 11:02

Dorothy you've put John M's poem
On a level we need to think about
We kill off these animals which are of benefit
To our natural world, there is no doubt

But these kill-offerers don't give a toss
Kill the fox, cull the badger shoot the crows
They're just little grown-up Terences
Adding to our problems and our woes

Come on the giant... ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 25th Feb 2019 10:58

Trevor,

Congratulations on this award which is richly deserved. I too am a great fan of Eiolt, Auden, Whitman and Ginsberg as they all inspire me.

Your poem is an interwoven tapestry of beauty and imagination.
Thank you for this.

Keith

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 25th Feb 2019 10:44

Hi Vautaw, just wanted to say, I really like your poetry but even more now that I finally got round to listening to your readings. Really, really good. So I had to add you to my favourites. Thank you.

J.☺

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Sofia Urquiza

Mon 25th Feb 2019 10:38

Oh wow! Your poem reminded me of someone or maybe 2?..Why do men like to do this ? It's so not right on their behavior ?. Despite this, your poem was very good!

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Sofia Urquiza

Mon 25th Feb 2019 10:27

Aw this is love!?

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Sofia Urquiza

Mon 25th Feb 2019 10:19

Very lovely poem?

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Mae Foreman

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:51

Wow! Incredibly beautiful piece Vautau!
Thank you ?
Mae

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Mae Foreman

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:43

This is beautiful! Congratulations! ?

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Various

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:33

This resonated with me Trevor I loved it.

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:32

Hi Mae, just wanted to say how much I'm loving the readings it just adds a whole new element to your poetry. Keep it up love, sounds great.

J. x

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:15

I really like this, especially with the reading, it has a really beautiful flow. Mind you, it is read, really well which helps.?

J.

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John McDonough

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:03

Made me giggle, 6 more years and I can join

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John McDonough

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:03

Made me giggle, 6 more years and I can join

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 08:38

Do we all have a little bit of Terence tucked up iside us? (present company excepted)

Kill the the fox - it is vermin
cull the protected badger it spreads T.B.
shoot the crows even though they cleanse the fields of grubs.

Your giant is much needed.

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 08:23

I have just looked through the clips. They are so funny, i loved the bossy seal.
I think you have proved a point.

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Mae Foreman

Mon 25th Feb 2019 08:20

Thank you Vautau! You are right. I do believe that many people feel the way I do.?

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John McDonough

Mon 25th Feb 2019 08:11

Don ... the kid was an obvious psycho, fortunately he got his comeuppance before graduating to furry animals and humans

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 25th Feb 2019 08:10

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Feb 2019 07:12

I followed Terence in his nasty little pursuits down the poem and thought what this little tyke needs is some big giant to come up behind him. As if by magic....

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 06:36

I took so much from this Trevor. For me, it represents a powerful, sensitive depiction of watching a daughter's awakening. Well deserved POTW. Congratulations.

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 02:03

If only a few lashings would stop the suffering for the masses, I think there would be a long line of wrongdoers willing to endure the pain. Great piece of poetry Mae, made even better through your reciting. Thanks for sharing! ?

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d.knape

Mon 25th Feb 2019 01:41

test. test.

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AM Cash

Sun 24th Feb 2019 23:20

So true. Money is not enough

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AM Cash

Sun 24th Feb 2019 23:19

I like the life lesson x

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Mae Foreman

Sun 24th Feb 2019 23:18

Thank you A.M.?

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AM Cash

Sun 24th Feb 2019 23:17

Fascinating and love the audio

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Various

Sun 24th Feb 2019 22:07

Thanks for your comments on "tonight" Ray. Its a strange world to live in sometimes. I'm a great fan of Camus and I hope he would have appreciated this too.
Sometimes in social situations I find the banality hard to deal with, I know what you mean about feeling outside. With the urge but no capacity to be quite "inside". Thanks again. Phil.

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Heart of Lead

Sun 24th Feb 2019 21:52

Ah, psychopomp is one of my favorite words. Very deep imagery you have here. The line between life and death is an interesting place to dance.

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kealan coady

Sun 24th Feb 2019 21:23

I like this, the word placement really works. A lot of big ideas conveyed In a very minimalist way. Looking forward to reading more.

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kealan coady

Sun 24th Feb 2019 21:20

I enjoyed this, its a classy piece of writing.

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kealan coady

Sun 24th Feb 2019 21:18

This is a great piece of writing. Keep up the good work.

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kealan coady

Sun 24th Feb 2019 21:13

This is amazing ? beautifully written. I have a feeling you might be interested in Thelema, have a look into it if you haven't already. Nietzsche is one of Crowley's Gnostic saints.

93 93/93

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raypool

Sun 24th Feb 2019 20:57

You two lovely men I can talk honestly to I know, and would just like to say that this poem affects me keenly. I am a light drinker, not through any sense of moral containment or preference, but I would be flat out as my capacity is so low , as was my father's. He tried me out in the pub at 15, and was disappointed that I didn't take to it. Same with smoking , though I've always liked a pipe.
Lots of my good friends and indeed lady friends have liked a tipple. A few went under early. Lots of musos I know garnered work through bar contacts. I was always on the outside looking in. So in that sense probably the same mentally as you two.

To be understood in casual company is a tall order. I can't teach anything to you both about bosom buddies I know so I wouldn't try.

Well worth the reading and understanding Phil.

Ray

Very best, mate.

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Martin Elder

Sun 24th Feb 2019 20:01

I think you are speaking for the masses with this one Tommy. I can certainly relate to it.
Love the battles with inadequate education
Nice one

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John Marks

Sun 24th Feb 2019 19:57

Ta very muchly our kid! J

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Martin Elder

Sun 24th Feb 2019 19:56

At the risk of laying myself open to complete ridicule I am quite certain that I live in a world of my own at times. My default is worry when I start to believe my own B.S.
A marvellous poem as always Keith both in its art and its ability to make the reader stop and think
Love it

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Martin Elder

Sun 24th Feb 2019 19:52

You written something quite amazing about such a everyday vegetable. I will never quite see peppers in a any other light again.
Nice one Ray

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Martin Elder

Sun 24th Feb 2019 19:49

Fabulous as always Stu. You have once again managed to capture something of beauty with such few words. As David says it brightens the day
Nice one mate

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Martin Elder

Sun 24th Feb 2019 19:44

Another wonderful poem Robert. Great to hear you reading it as well.
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Sun 24th Feb 2019 19:37

An absolutely stunning poem Rachel. No pressure but you rarely post anything duff.
Love it
Martin

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Sun 24th Feb 2019 19:06

Sorry Ray I think i may have spoiled it for others.

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ken eaton-dykes

Sun 24th Feb 2019 17:29

Thanks again Keith.

Ken

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