Wait until it’s melted snow
Then come back for another go.
Comment is about I Found A Fiver In The Snow (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
To paraphrase Elbow, Po,
Pull “those curtains wide”.
Comment is about ST SAMPSON'S OVER 60's CLUB (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sun 6th Jan 2019 10:39
Very beaitifully portrayed...spring of life could be the happiness, joy and mirth...the gloominess of winter could be sadness, sorrows and pain...?
Comment is about Winter´s Doldrums (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thanks KJ..scales re-zeroed. That works nicely..
Comment is about Greed (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Nice one
we all put a bit of weight on over Christmas
have you thought of re-zeroing the scales
Comment is about Greed (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
If I get too busy, Kev, you can take one of my slots.
Brian - It’s my public service. Noblesse oblige.
Comment is about ST SAMPSON'S OVER 60's CLUB (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 6th Jan 2019 09:23
Thank God for you John...someone to share the misogyny accusations with.
Comment is about ST SAMPSON'S OVER 60's CLUB (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Do you tell them that even though you're retired, you like to keep your hand in.
I bet you were round there at Christmas for the Knees-up
Comment is about ST SAMPSON'S OVER 60's CLUB (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Gopal Gupta
Sun 6th Jan 2019 06:17
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sun 6th Jan 2019 05:54
Metamorphism....nice write up?
Comment is about The day she found herself (blog)
Original item by Shuchi Batra
Thank you Kevin and Po.
Comment is about The day she found herself (blog)
Original item by Shuchi Batra
so nice poem...Beautiful relation
Sunday, January 6, 2019
7:59 AM
Feet dance
when we have a chance
in love to mingle
and feel as loving people
nothing matters
as surroundings offer
and echo over love
to be sincerely believed
everything remains quiet
when we let
no moments to pass
in our love stance
my soul feels your touch
to reach
an inner depth
and make the heavy breath
That is I know
and go
by simple assumption
the love is beautiful relation
Hasmukh Mehta
Comment is about Shuchi Batra (poet profile)
Original item by Shuchi Batra
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sun 6th Jan 2019 03:54
Dear L, many of your poems seem to be so close to reality.... introspecting oneself.....how true n how exact...but how can u know so well...?
Comment is about Waiting (blog)
Original item by Lysa d
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sun 6th Jan 2019 03:53
thank you Po.... not always...i can be irrational and illogical, crazy when in anger, sentimental or possessed..phewwwww..?
Comment is about Waiting (blog)
Original item by Lysa d
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sun 6th Jan 2019 03:41
Dear Bindu... i m just a call away....don't worry!! this too shall pass..there are ppl in our life who just can't see others happy, so they keep creating such disturbances and turmoil.
[Just wonder how one can be so insensitive
Can’t comprehend how it can be so repetitive!]..............very true!!!
think it to be a test from Allah... and attain patience...i know it is hard... but give all your problems to God...have faith n keep going dear.... ❤
Comment is about Shut those Doors.. (blog)
Original item by Bindu Trigunayak
<Deleted User> (19836)
Sun 6th Jan 2019 03:12
Thank you Lynn for your lovely comment on 'Be Whole', I'm glad you enjoyed it. Happy New Year!
Comment is about lynn hahn (poet profile)
Original item by lynn hahn
What a deep and sad loss! So many people have felt this way. You describe that place of desolation well.
Comment is about A Tub of Ice Cream And A Lifetime of Tears (blog)
Original item by Damon Blackery
Balancing on the edge of doing something to hurt that you will most likely regret later. Nice capture of that tenuous area where most relationships go off kilter.
Comment is about Tennisexuals (blog)
Original item by Robert C Gaulke
A solid cry for understanding of an obvious truth.
Comment is about propaganda (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Big Sal
Sun 6th Jan 2019 01:44
It's crazy how a single color (or lack thereof) can represent so much.
Comment is about propaganda (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Thanks Sal; I'm still trying to get climbing over to people who've never done it, silly really.
Comment is about Mick Burke (Everest 1980) (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
Thank you for reading and liking the poem, Lisa, Jon and Becky..x
Comment is about Greed (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Thanks Po nice to be back. Time to start flexing the brain muscle once more.
Hi Don thank you for the comment nice to be rhyming again.
Hi Brian, I have taken your advice, scales locked safely away..
Comment is about Greed (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Big Sal
Sat 5th Jan 2019 18:56
Excellent projection of thought and diction, Alan.?
Comment is about Mick Burke (Everest 1980) (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
I recall a superb BBC documentary of other years called "The Queen's Realm" which took us around this country through the
seasons and finished on a truly uplifting use of the poem, the
final words of which adorn this particular poetry promotion, beautifully
spoken as the camera rose higher and higher over a verdant spring
landscape that seemed to stretch for miles.
Trees - what a worthy subject for any anthology!
Comment is about Afresh, afresh, afresh: publishers seek poems for anthology on trees (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Don't forget the Assyrians, the Egyptians, the Persians, the Greeks, the Mongols, the Aztecs, the Russians, the Dutch, the Portuguese, the Austrian-Hungarians, and the Turks (the Germans and the French are too obvious to bother with).
More recent candidates will probably pollute themselves off the face
of the planet.
Comment is about Unseated (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thanks ma'am for understanding the feelings behind words.. Thank you for reading ?
Comment is about I was Wrong! (blog)
Original item by Bindu Trigunayak
Thank you dear Po for reading and appreciating my poem ??
Comment is about I was Wrong! (blog)
Original item by Bindu Trigunayak
Thanks Big Sal.. For reading and appreciating ??
Comment is about One Life is not enough! (blog)
Original item by Bindu Trigunayak
Nice one Freda. Very Yorkshire but with more romance than the county usually admits to.
Comment is about My Dragon Husband (blog)
Original item by Freda Davis
Big Sal
Sat 5th Jan 2019 15:55
Constant support, constant presence, constant inspiration.
Thanks for being here.
Comment is about Jon Stainsby (poet profile)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
I've written a love poem book with beautiful and riveting poems.
store link is: https://payhip.com/CALYPSIS
Get your copy and let your poetry soul be inspired and filled with love.
Comment is about vincent mukwevho (poet profile)
Original item by vincent mukwevho
Every single hair on my body stood up on edge while reading this raw ' well written piece.. Loved it ?
Comment is about Love story (blog)
Original item by Pagan Poetry
Incredible pome, it brought tears to my eyes...
Its such a touching subject as we wait until death in order to speak kindly of someone or to see family after a long time. Bravo ?
Comment is about Please Come See Me (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Sat 5th Jan 2019 14:25
thanks Don.
are you on your game
and on your skis?
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
Original item by Don Matthews
Enjoyed this a lot.
You've got an undeniable talent, keep writing!
Comment is about Sunday June 24, 2018, 10:14 PM (blog)
Original item by hk
Wow, I really like your style. For me, the first 3 verses were perfect evocations of feeling, location and style. Will definitely read more of your work. ?
Comment is about Wednesday, January 2, 2019, 11:19 PM (blog)
Original item by hk
Its cool !!!
As long as I can also have a tasty biscuit haha...
No suger in my tea doh, im sweet enough (lol)
I would be hesitant to take such things... The mind is already a powerful tool.. My penal gland has been causing me to see alot of purple when I close my eyes, along with sharp pains. Not quiet sure if that means it has opened or its just super stressed from the shit I caused it to see hahaha... Tea will have to have a normal tea bag, anything eles and ill be playing with fire... Although it would be nice to be saved by hot fire men ha ha?
Comment is about Lucid dreams (blog)
Original item by Lysa d
Big Sal
Sat 5th Jan 2019 12:51
Yes, the tea doesn't really affect you during daytime hours, but taken before bed, and your dreams will amplify significantly.
Po, I always have biscuits. It doesn't matter if we're talking Texas Toast or a damn cheese roll. I gots it locked down.
(Sorry for addressing Po via your lovely piece, Lisa)
Comment is about Lucid dreams (blog)
Original item by Lysa d
Po that would be something I would never take.. since I was a kid I would dream of places I have never been, if I had a single thought about ice cream or a unicorn it would appear in my dream in an instant.. Then as I aged the innocence was replaced with fear and worry and my dreams then started to become reality. Except nothing good came from them.. I then aged some more and my thirst for truth and answer's opened my mind to explore all we wore created for and that's when the real magic happened. I could fall asleep with a simple thought about where I want to be and what I wish to do and boom!!!! I have control over how I choose to spend my sleeping hours. My mind travels to places I never even knew existed. These places are out side of my dreams, but as I sleep I know not to go to far as I get an uncomfortable feeling the more I drift and wonder off chasing colors of energetic fire balls of crazyness. I see people who passed Away but its no fairytale, its actually a very uneasy feeling of discomfort and border line scary...
From dreaming to been able to tap into psychic ability I just feel it in my bones that their is wayyyy more to explore and understand. I would be afraid drugs may be an interference regarding me been in control.. When fear hits my dreams in any shape or form I am calm. I know its just an illusion so I dont panic, when you panic you are no longer dreaming, you are in the very center of your own nightmare. Mine can be soooo wild and scary so I need to stay in control ?
Comment is about Lucid dreams (blog)
Original item by Lysa d
Ghazala, thank you for your kind yet powerful words.
And yes! She was once as weak as a dead horse and as fragile as her nans china set,until she found her worth and blossomed like the amazing butterfly she is...
And when that emotion she buried came knocking back, in an instant she forgot her self until he made her eyes flow yet again. she remembered how she got her strength and why. Her eyes dried up like the Sahara desert and her body no longer felt like she was a diabetic having a fit. She became who she has always been. STRONG..
Comment is about Waiting (blog)
Original item by Lysa d
Excellent Richard, I herald from Fleetwood just along the coast from Blackpool. As a child going to the Tower was a real treat..
Comment is about Blackpool (blog)
Original item by Richard Alfred
Highly effective lines Richard. We are in the presence of blowsiness and atmosphere that clings like shit to a blanket (sorry that's a musician's expression). I spent seasons in the winter garden playing for dances, and together with a romantic affair there is lots to remember, including Les Dawson!
I'm not sure whether Adolf would have enjoyed the new pleasure beach !
Thanks for making my day.
Ray
Comment is about Blackpool (blog)
Original item by Richard Alfred
I love the last two lines, I totally aggree.
Beautifully put.
Comment is about A Candlestick (blog)
Original item by Harrison Peterson
Bonaparte's
Sun 6th Jan 2019 11:28
Simply beautiful.
Comment is about I am nothing (blog)
Original item by Hasmukh Mehta