Martin, Ray, David and Big Sal, thank you very much for your comments. Always much appreciated.
Comment is about Lark song (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Dear Brian, that is what i was trying to say..may be I was not able to interpret it fully..Money has controlled us in every means..yeah for sure it gives security..but we are scanty of it,we cant even enjoy the happy moments of life to the fullest..today the value of money is like anything..if we want to lead a happy life with every resources without compromising anything with our comfort..we have to have plenty of money in hand...
Comment is about Money is controlling our life (blog)
Original item by Bindu Trigunayak
<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 17th Dec 2018 09:47
Shades of Lionel Shriver...
...we need to talk about Don.
Comment is about Cogitate (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
The government can’t be held to blame for 17m people telling them to build a submarine made of cheese. They can be held to blame for trying to build one rather than telling the people not to be so stupid.
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Comment is about AND SO THIS IS BREXIT (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
This is so true and wickedly written:
unless we have the things and the gadgets
we need for the things that need cleaning
With the other gadgets.
lol
We want...We NEED...We want some more...so we can need ever more...For a culture so bloated on consumption, we sure are underfed on morals and values.
Comment is about Escape velocity (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
Dang...deep write. You had me going from the start...I was thinking somebody was dying of cancer or something. Never thought of that...
Comment is about ‘Transfixed’ (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
This is so real and I relate on levels that I wish didn't even exist.
Beautiful, thought provoking and well-penned.
Comment is about Trials and Tears (blog)
Original item by VHH
The comments are appreciated - thank you. The Devon lane is a
real place from my past - in the South Hams between Dartmouth and Salcombe.
Comment is about DEVON LANE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Ask why the European Communities Act wasn't immediately repealed by Parliament when the result of the referendum was known, with the initiative with the government to put forward
proposals from the "people's power" point of view. Then ask if
the problem is actually Brexit OR those in Parliament who have led
us down the EU garden path and still want us there.
Remainers loath leaving
The EU - like grieving
For a mummy that guides them
But always over-rides them.
Brexit didn't suit
So they don't give a hoot
They're kids needing nannies
To wipe their little fannies
As long as they do
What the nannies tell them to..
........................................................
Comment is about AND SO THIS IS BREXIT (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
beautiful poem Jon. Thanks for posting
Comment is about Lark song (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
I assume that this is your song. I love the style of music and the video. I am a big fan of interpretive dance.
Love it Robert
Comment is about Thank You (blog)
Original item by Robert C Gaulke
I think that probably summed up the evening Nigel , but none the less a good night
Nice one mate
Comment is about Festive Fuel For Thought (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Ah terry nappies I remember them well soaking in buckets prior to going through the washing machine. what fun!. though a whole lot better than disposables
Comment is about RECYCLING (blog)
Original item by ray pool
beauty can be found at any time
If you can stay clear headed
enough to find it
Which we can't....and avoid all the diversions and cul de sacs....which we also can't.
This interior monologue moves smoothly to dump us back at the beginning of a thought process.
Excellent poem
John
Comment is about December 21st (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
very very nice even with just these few words, but In would love to hear it put to music.
Comment is about No title to this sad song (blog)
Original item by Eden Louise
Absolutely superb Tom. So beautifully crafted . I love the line
'as angels hang from the clock.'
Nice one
Comment is about December 21st (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
A wonderful poem made all the better for hearing you read it Andy. Although to be fair because I have heard you read so many times it is not difficult to imagine. there is a real richness in this piece
Love it
Comment is about Winter Sundays (blog)
Original item by AM Cash
Another winner here Rich. I love the sparseness of words that help to drive the poem along. Love it
Comment is about Night Life (blog)
Original item by Rich
heady days indeed when mail was delivered with such alacrity and due diligence. I can even remember to deliveries a day.
Comment is about MAIL (blog)
Original item by d.knape
I have been reading an article about the Amish this weekend which puts me in mind of antidote to such behaviour to constantly consume.
Love the poem Alan
nice one
Comment is about Escape velocity (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
Well sustained Peter. It is easy to let poems like this peter out. Snow is beautiful at first fall but soon the virgin blankness is trodden into sludge, at least in my city.
John
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘Waking up to Snow’ by Peter Taylor (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Hey great poem makes my new one seem too boring
Comment is about Festive Fuel For Thought (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
<Deleted User> (18474)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:02
Consumerism.
We need more. Eat more. Spend more. And still we want more.
Are we any happier?
And at what cost? " We choke the weak". Our cheap £1 t-shirt made in Bangladesh by an 8 year old.
Were like locust. An infection. Eating away the planet.
We will burn out. But so will the planet unless we change our ways.
This is what your poem made me think about.
It made me think.
Love your work Mr Braddock.
Beno.
Comment is about Escape velocity (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
Exceptional, the external triggers of internal wonderings and struggles. It has an elusive quality which makes it so special; and I feel that there is escapism in the book reading and the awareness of that is a return into the void of sensitivity and also of no sense . That is where went in the poem.
So pleased you're back with new material Tom.
Ray
Comment is about December 21st (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
A nightmare of the search for a reason. A bit like the old testament, Sheboah begat Ezkarah, begat Noah, etc etc. I like the concept of a worldigig!
Ray
Comment is about Escape velocity (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
Big Sal
Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:40
Great last line on the second to last stanza, Alan. Whole piece really.
Comment is about Escape velocity (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
<Deleted User> (18474)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:26
Similar sentiment to be found in Cafe Scene.
Just going through your back catalogue.
Comment is about DO NOT (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
You have done very well here. I echo all the others with my feelings.
I like the lines
'High above the grey clouds parted
By the smiling sun outsmarted'
Don?
Comment is about DEVON LANE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (18474)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:02
Everything does go. But when does someone start to think like that? 29, 39, 49, 59.
Think we should just enjoy all the beauty around us, whenever we can. Quite blatantly you see it all the time Maybe forget all the mundane crap of everyday life, and enjoy every breathing space. Maybe one day you will feel completely lost like your dad........ my dad, but worrying about it will only soil the here and now.
Every new page is a blank new day still to be written. Make it good dude.
Loving your work. Beno.
Comment is about December 21st (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
A wistful and optimistic eulogy for a place you obviously are proud of and look back to with fondness Mark. This has a real genuine power to convey a mood and transport us. Nicely rhymed, it all makes sense.
Ray
Comment is about DEVON LANE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Hi M.C. I always enjoy your poetry, but this is outstanding. A gentle journey of reflection. ?
Comment is about DEVON LANE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 20:50
Great flow Alan to describe a mad pursuit.
Comment is about Escape velocity (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
<Deleted User> (19913)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 20:32
Wonderful Peter, congratulations. ?
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘Waking up to Snow’ by Peter Taylor (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
<Deleted User> (18474)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 19:26
I do feel the panic, and I can feel it slipping away, but rarely!!! Most of the time I'm drowning in it, and my trees are full.
Thankfully.
Beno.
Comment is about DO NOT (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
This has got to rank among your finest poems to date. There is an almost wistful mood to it that does not over play sentimentality.
Nice one
Comment is about DEVON LANE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 17:42
MC - old Knapey's in the New World and in the dark ages.
Comment is about MAIL (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Little white van? I'm curious...where are you?
I can tell you that there - without fail -
It's always red for our Royal Mail.
Plus - the postie comes up to the door
And its letter-box sees mail drop on the floor.
Comment is about MAIL (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 16:00
Your poem reminds me of my childhood days.... Writing letters, sending greeting cards and postcards were so much fun....emails n many apps today has made conversation easy but that fun of waiting has gone.....nice work...i kindda enjoy ur poems...?
Comment is about MAIL (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 15:55
Another poem that touched my heart.....?
Comment is about REMEMBERING (blog)
Original item by ray pool
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 15:51
It's my favourite colour. Very soothing....your poem is beautiful!! ?
Comment is about LAVENDER FIELDS FOREVER (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Dear AM - reference your latest blog, you might want to
check the letters of the word "squirals" (red or grey!).
Cheers - MC
Comment is about AM Cash (poet profile)
Original item by AM Cash
Beautifully poignant and well crafted Jon. Hopeful and hopeless is a winning phrase.
Ray
Comment is about Lark song (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 16th Dec 2018 12:42
Lovely Christmas atmosphere
Comment is about The Ghost of Christmas Passed (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Big Sal
Sun 16th Dec 2018 12:21
You're quite good at inserting adjectives and imagery into your work. It works very well as a style.?
Comment is about For You (That's Far but Near) (blog)
Original item by Suko Waspodo
raypool
Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:41
Ghazala, thanks for looking back to this - it is quite a sight to see a field of lavender, spectacular! All the best to you.
Ray
Comment is about LAVENDER FIELDS FOREVER (blog)
Original item by ray pool