Bless you Tia , I am glad this poem made a favourable impression. I do have a remarkable memory at times for the most seemingly insignificant detail. But it meant a lot to me at the time.
Cheers
Comment is about imagination (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Ryan
Sun 12th Nov 2017 19:57
That was beautiful. Nice work Keith
Comment is about The Passage of Time (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
This is lovely- thank you for taking me back to my childhood! Although, to be fair, I never really lost my vivid imagination. It is something I have nurtured and loved throughout my life, and something I'm proud of still! In any case, this is spot on, and captures my childhood and memories excellently!
Thank you for the memories!
Tia Rae
Comment is about imagination (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
David, this is full of imagery which paints a picture so clear with added thoughtfulness. Thank you. Keith
Comment is about Wistful @ Wittering (blog)
Original item by David T Jones
Jon, good to hear from you and thanks for your comment. Keith
Comment is about The Passage of Time (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thought-provoking stuff Keith. Made me stop and think which is a good thing; well done mate
Comment is about The Passage of Time (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
MC Thank you these words of good advice and truth. Keith
Comment is about The Passage of Time (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Big Sal
Sun 12th Nov 2017 15:44
Salute them all for bearing aloft the banner when called
upon in our name!
Comment is about The Bravest Of The Brave (blog)
Original item by Wendy Higson
So much to ponder and pay heed to. We are but pawns of
the passing hours. Let us leave the board having played
our best game!
"Do not squander Time.
It is the stuff life itself is made of".
Comment is about The Passage of Time (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thanks for finding and liking this John. I'm so glad you got my drift, which was to suggest rather than be too up front.
also gratitude for the extra likes Col and 220 August !
Ray.
Comment is about IN THE WHEATSHEAF (blog)
Original item by ray pool
I especially liked the second stanza. Quite evocative, and the overall tone of the poem suggests rather than spells out.
Comment is about IN THE WHEATSHEAF (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Sun 12th Nov 2017 14:14
It's so simple and chic. And a beautiful message. Love it!
Best wishes,
Sidra
Comment is about Superpower (blog)
Original item by Jenny Kelly
Thanks to Desmond, Nigel, Colin, David and Ray for liking this
and to Andy for commenting.
Thanks to al for reading
Cheers
Martin
Comment is about Dance of death (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Sun 12th Nov 2017 14:13
It is beautiful. The brilliance is its versatility for each reader.
Good thoughts,
Sidra
Comment is about Where did it go? (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
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Sun 12th Nov 2017 12:59
<Deleted User> (18118)
Sun 12th Nov 2017 12:55
Thanks for your comment M.C. Much appreciated.
It must be agony to be always thinking "What could have been?"
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Sun 12th Nov 2017 08:56
Thank you Colin and Keith for your comments, they are both very much appreciated
Thanks des
Comment is about cut copper (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS
Sun 12th Nov 2017 06:02
Every line read,still no answer, what have I lost? Great suspense
All the best des
Comment is about Where did it go? (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
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Sun 12th Nov 2017 03:28
Reminds me of the story the velveteen rabbit, whose all tattered because he's been loved too much Xx
Comment is about That kind of love.... (blog)
Original item by Wardah
Ryan
Sun 12th Nov 2017 00:15
Ryan
Sat 11th Nov 2017 23:43
I'm with Eric, i need to know what "it" is.
Of course, you left that for the reader to decide. Very clever, you could read it twice and "it" would be two different things, depending on your mood.
Comment is about Where did it go? (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Brilliant. And I am left wondering, "What was it that I misplaced?!"
You pulled me in with each statement, each breath. I was eagerly anticipating the end where I would find out "What" it was that I was missing. And yet, you leave us to question our own selves as if we have left something behind somewhere and you are helping us look for "it."
Brilliant.
Comment is about Where did it go? (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Thanks, MC. I am keen to point out that this is not autobiographical.
Comment is about EMMA, EMMA ENEMA (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Sat 11th Nov 2017 16:32
Thank you for the appreciation Kealan. And you are right, a final proof does sound better. I hope I become a better poet to relate to many other people as well.
Best wishes,
Sidra
Comment is about Dear God! (blog)
Original item by Sidra Shahid
Hi Chris!
These haikus are great. It's amazing how powerful you make three short lines, how much energy, emotion, and meaning you can pack in.
Well done!
Tia
Comment is about Three Haiku (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Thanks for the comments. The gratitude for their sacrifice
can never be over-emphasised. Every time I witness the
tendency to moan and groan - ironically more prevalent
now when folk enjoy a life far beyond the reality of that
which these here remembered knew - I take a moment to
think of them and what they were never to have and to hold.
Comment is about THE MENIN GATE - Remembrance Day Remembered (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
A very pertinent view on a rarely considered aspect of the
aftermath of conflict...the sad human disappointments
that can affect those left behind and those who also
suffer as a result.
Comment is about YOUR NOT HALF THE MAN HE WAS (blog)
Original item by ken eaton-dykes
It's a hard life...or not as the case may be!
A cert. for the "Malady Maker" top 10 (not inches I suspect),
and, you never know: Poem of the Weak!
If you'll pardon the invitation: keep 'em coming JC.
Comment is about EMMA, EMMA ENEMA (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Brilliant!
Comment is about On the suicide of Sally Brampton (blog)
Original item by Emma-Jane Stradling
Thank you Emma for this tribute
Comment is about Remembering (blog)
Original item by Emma-Jane Stradling
Kevin, thank you for your comment on this poem. Much appreciated. Keith
Comment is about November (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Desmond and Kevin, thank you for your favourable comments on this poem. Much appreciated. Keith
Comment is about The Cerebral Cavern (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thanks Keith
Much appreciated.
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
A beautifully 'aimed' piece. I empathise with the sentiment. A good read. The only thing I'd change is 'love that needs one more proof' to 'love that needs a final proof' I think it might add a bit of urgency to the piece. Well written.
Comment is about Dear God! (blog)
Original item by Sidra Shahid
Thank you to both of you, your input is always appreciated.
Comment is about The Dig (blog)
Original item by Kealan Coady
Thanks Sal man, much appreciated
Comment is about Owl By Lamplight (blog)
Original item by Kealan Coady
Hi Wendy. You know that i like the work that you do about protecting children. And i often leave a comment or click the like button on these pieces.
But I'm sorry to say, some of your other stuff doesn't sit comfortably with me. This one I'm afraid smacks of islamaphobia. I know that you have taken children in from all backgrounds, and i don't know the back story of some of these kids. Perhaps they come from all faiths (there's good and bad in everyone).
Sorry to be negative, especially knowing all the good work that you do, but i wouldn't be true to myself if i didn't say.
kevin
Comment is about Bad Feelings (blog)
Original item by Wendy Higson
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Sat 11th Nov 2017 06:20
Holy-moley M.K! I'm not really qualified to tell you if this is technically good or not. What I can tell you was it moved me to tears as I get up with my coffee ready for work. What an awesome start to my day! Thank you very much. Beno.
Comment is about maybe, I.J. (blog)
Original item by m.k.
Big Sal
Sat 11th Nov 2017 02:19
Big Sal
Sat 11th Nov 2017 02:16
I've heard something first hand. A partner was told to relax as he sees (naked) patients all the time; HE sees and is not bothered, contemptible middle-class shit, it's not about HIS comfort but the womans. I had to intervene on one occasion.
But where was I? Oh yes, gallows humour Laura, you make light of what you endured but the piece contains a sting in the tail. Tommy xx
Comment is about Just Relax (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Emer Ni Chorra
Sun 12th Nov 2017 22:43
Congratulations and best of luck ?
Comment is about Night Work - Launch (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding