Hello John.
To be perfectly honest I was at a bit of a loss over what to title Sixty!
I have just spent a week or so in France with a bunch of friends celebrating the BIG 60 and this stuff just came about, so I suppose it was much as you say. Don't read too much into the literal though, my life is far less exciting. Cheers mate (come on your Spurs).

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Hello Greg, thank you for the kind comments for Sixty. Regards, Graham

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thats an interesting illustration you make alana. we are all created within female to become female...i used to like a band called rudimentary peni...i think thats the initial stage of male development. i agree we are all a mixture of different facets of each gender. i know its true of different races that there is more variation of physical type accross race than between races. im not sure how this relates to different genders tho.
the line there was to mimic the tones of the bible. the idea is that the subject is angry with just how far she was short changed by the christian ideal.

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Your inspirational! I thought it was brilliant and again we get to know about you xxxx

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Would love to be there but it is such a distance to travel...good luck ladies (as if you need any luck) x

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Hi Rachel andy. n's comment I think if you know the line? This is how it is! and ever shall be? I don't think it needed adding as I automatically did! Soz I'm an atheist, Adam has an X chromosome, because we all develop from female to male? He also has nipples and ovaries (which drop or not) everything was in place to become female? Male sex is the last bit to develop, That's why we are all such a complex mixture.Anyway I'm not preaching xxx

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Hilarious, Ann! Excellent flow, and gave me a good laugh. xx

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Thanks for commenting on The Tartan Bard John. I know what you mean about his popularity but he does come from an interesting era and I really look forward to seeing what lies beneath the covers of the book. Much obliged.

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hey i love the idea of the loo wallpaper :) i was quite into collage at one point and as inspired by the photo montage work of artists such as Gee vaucher (crass) i made a great wall piece the shape of a leg in stockings made up of various images of women in bondage..from rhianna to some sleazy dungeon birds...its great but it was thrown out of my degree course for 'not fitting the brief' ha oh well i might put it up in the loo now, that tranquil sea scene is so yesterday ;)
thanks for all your comments. we all have to work the camera. On that shot i was thinking all about a certain mr. i wanted to see what he saw...voyeuristic maybe but not vain.an interesting read is Berger's 'ways of seeing' about the spectacle of womanhood. sure theres loads of feminist writing on it. it used to be my job to put photos in the galleries on here which when u think about it is quite a position of power. i have not exploited it so far, yet x

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I think it's very well written, I like, you express your feelings and you let people into your thoughts, but so easy to read! I have to try free verse xx

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Again! wonderful, loved reading it, made me smile too, I think you have a healthy mind, It did remind me back in the 70's I decorated my bathroom with 100's of pics from mags, and words I liked in black7white, completely covered the walls, just pasted them on? gave you something to read and think about when you were on the loo! and everyone liked it? You can be as individual as you like xxxxx

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Just realised I HAVE written a political poem - sort of! I wrote it for "homework" for the writers group I'm in - we had to imagine we were the parent of a famous or infamous person - which I sort of did. Maybe I'll post it - might be a bit of a change from my recent stuff! ;)

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Thanks for your comments about my verse to date. Keep writing from the heart!

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Beautiful poem, Dave! But...it sounds like a miracle.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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no worries, i like your comments because they are true.

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it's here. Just put it up:

http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/newsgroupview.php?NewsGroupsID=3&NewsThreadsID=1303#msgcontent_13714

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Hi folks
Glad more have taken this up.

Political poetry is often satirical. I think sometimes we need a bit of self-satire.

Just to take three subjects:
We are all busy blaming the bankers for our present ills, but very conveniently forgetting the benefits of the huge increase in credit cards, etc; which we all so recently enjoyed. (They still should have known what they were doing)

Britain, and all the West, have been consuming like billy ho for the last two decades. Consumables have to be produced, production needs workers, if we can`t provide the workers ourselves, should certain newspapers moan so much about immigration?

Also the lifelong social security dependancy problem:
This started in the eighties, when financial globaliation and interst rate changes were forced upon us.(in the one road where I worked four factories closed)
The decision to ease admitance to social security payments was made in order to keep the unemployment -rate down for political purposes. (but was financially beneficial to the unemployed)...How, therefore should we view the people who took advantage of it?

I realise that these are personal views (I speak as a life-long union official)but they all leave a bit of room, perhaps, for some self-satire.

Anyway, maybe this might arouse a bit of opposition. (things were going very quiet)

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Hi Otis, it's always a bit radical and usually impertinent when someone suggests excising the beginning of a poem. Thanks for explaining and defending why the lines are there. I really enjoyed the spirit of it all.

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Greg
Thanks for commenting on Speaking In Tongues & John Coltrane Didn't Practice. I find your suggestion to "loose lines" editorial and missing their origin and purpose.
"Earth is round
Universe is vast
But world is bigger
World is limited only
By imagination and practice"
I agree they are not as poetic as I want them to be but they represent a reference that inspired the poem. I wrote the poem for the recently past Equinox which this year was on Coltrane's birthday. I was in a free improvisation with other artists including a dancer who made moves that gave me the lines, from there I realized Trane expressed that in how he lived and worked. Like Trane I play all of the phrases that come to me. I may sort through them later but when they come I use them. This is still a new poem and I may learn better ways to say what I mean or describe what I saw and these lines will hold place for the rewrite until I do. If and when I find more lines I won't resist them.
Hallowing the search,
J. Otis

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Hi Julian
Are you going to put this up for Discussion, or leave it on this thread.
I've never been sure what (if any) the exact perameters of political comment are.
Harry mentions long rants, but surely a short sharp jab to the conscience is just as effective, if not more so.
I have written a few poems that I might believe are political, the majority admittedly aimed at the financial world that we live in now, but others may not see them in the same light.
Thoughts?

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Enjoyed this Jack.
What goes round comes round - my wardrobe's proof of that!

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Hi Steven

We've actually met many times in Manchester, and I've heard you recite on lots of occasions long ago at murky open mics - however...I had forgotten all about Euro '96, really made me chuckle (I would comment on your cynicism but for the fact you're so on the mark regarding our shopping being made safe...just see how wonderfully safe and shiny it now is in town!!).

See you anon sir

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...oh and also, I was contemplating changing the last line from 'lane' to 'page' to keep the fb motif going.Though weirdly I did have a mental image of her bobbing above a hedge on a country lane for some reason. What d'you think? xxx

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Oh no Ann, you mustn't delete. I love those poems. It is a bit like a journal isn't it?
It's great to see you on here too. I need to make more of an effort, maybe there could be a 'WOL for android' app? tee hee. Thanks for the wishes for my friend. I hope so too....probably very apparent why I didn't put this up on fb....hmmm...(note to self to examine the ethics of writing about other people's misfortunes)...xxx

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In some ways Fb is a bit like WOL, for some anyway. I wonder about going back and deleting many of my earlier stuff - I really should - embarrassing romantic twaddle or self-pitying rants. In a way though it's an archive or a diary and shows how we're moving through our lives, what stage we're at. I've only been on FB for a couple of months but on the whole I enjoy it. I hope your friend feels better soon! And I enjoyed many of the images in the poem. That last line is very haunting. (And it's good to see you here AS WELL as on FB!)xx

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Thanks both of you. I am a facebook addict, it's clear. I probably really ought to get a life :) . But, as a phenomenon of modern life, I consider it 'fair game' for poetry. This was inspired by seeing an acquaintance break down slowly on facebook, well over the course of a year and seeing people's attitudes to mental health and their depleting sympathy for her writ large. What's massive for me is that those comments will be on there as she recovers unless they get deleted and the implications are vast. Thanks again xxx

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This is an important subject, but I don't think it's out of order to praise your rhythm and technique in this, Rachel. It's what helps the reader to sit up and take notice. I particularly like "cold as wind from the beach", and "dribbles mistyped shots of conversation / transcending rhythm, chronology or sense". A lot of poets give Facebook the cold shoulder, like to pretend it doesn't exist. But I don't think you can; and you don't. In its originalities and peculiarities, at times it's arguably a form of literature in its own right.

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Hi Rach, excellent, original, individual as always, but I didn't say you could cut my girlie mags up! X

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Thanks Julian! I'll do that now.

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Thanks Steve. I'm wondering if I should consider using "t'" for those north of Watford!
E.G."Up and down t'silent rhyme" :-))

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I read this through a couple of times earlier today and it reminded me a lot of the stuff you see on Facebook occasionally. People's problems played out publically in trivia and 'mistyped shots at conversation'. I see that you have tagged it with such.

It's a sad one Rachel. I like the image of the head floating down the lane like a balloon.

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he-cursedly-admitted?
he-pitifully-admitted?

or-

he read Stef Wildes pitiful poetry-
then cursed?
haha-thats more like it eh Lynn!

very glad indeed he is coping ok

love

2nutters.xx

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Please note we have moved from the 4th Wednesday of each month to the fourth Thursday of each month.

The current Gig Guide listing is out by one day (something that is in the process of being rectified).

Hope to see people Thursday.

My Best

Chris

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Thank you Philipos, yes that is another idea I'm considering, thanks for the suggestion.
To be honest, we mostly just laughed this episode off - well, what else can you do? lol.x

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Hi Shirley, thank you for your kind remarks on 'The Tartan Bard' very much appreciated.

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T'was my pleasure to get your eyes a-twinkling. I really enjoyed your stuff also, it's very lyrical and really sticks in your head. As an avid music fan it's just right for me. Keep 'em coming :).

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Poets Corner at Glassfire -Hoylake Ch47 2AG...
'Where the most notable poem will earn a cash award from the Guest Poet on the Night'...

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Thanks for the encouragement John, was a while before I dared go into that pub again after they heard that one!

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Thanks for the comments on my work. I posted some here hoping it may kick-start me back into writing again (last few years have let keeping a roof over our heads take over my mind).

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Thanks for comment on my efforts. Enjoyed an hour reading your works and will be back for more.

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Awww... thanks a lot Jeff..haha I went out with a young lady from Billericay many years ago..(back in the string vest days!) ha ha.. Young Love eh mate?

I wrote another one for City talk FM in Liverpool called 'The Pull' about how a man can get back in the stirrups of dating after 'Divorce'..mine was in 2005.

My book is called 'Observations On Life' available from www.countyvise or via www.Amazon or Me! or all you can call 0151 647 3333 (Birkenhead Press) or please ask at your local book shops!!..Thank you for your kind comments..I have just started up 'Poets Corner' at 'Glassfire'in Hoylake and there will be spots available for both 'Guest Poets'each month who will be given a 15 min spot to read their own work..they will also either judge or help to judge the most notable poem on the night! - plus 'FREE' guitarist/singer for a couple of say 10 min spots during the night in the future..so attention all you local Poets or Songsters just let me know if you want to perform as soon as possible ok? (just e-mail me at poets-corner@hotmail.com or FB me ok? Thank you and All the best to you and all at WOL... Graham..(keep it real)...

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I particularly like poems that tell a simple story, simply (hope that doesn't sound offensive), and thsi does it for me

I'm a little bit like John, and I'd have probably left out the 'to' or the 'a', but then I didn't write it, and I'd probably want to chop somebody's doo-dah's off if they messed around with one of my pieces (none of which are perfect either).

Enjoyed this

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Hi Lynn - how about 'shamefacedly' this would accurately portray how he might have felt without giving him the cause. This was a difficult subject well expressed.

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I smiled at this. Schadenfreude eh? That's a name long enough to be a poem in its own right. My brothers are nuts about the game - but somewhere along the line I missed the point of it.

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It is your fault, Foxy!
You've got me all confusical about sighting otters locally (which I've been delighting in for the past year or so) with feeding them with thousands of pounds worth of fish!
The solution is this: when they've eaten the bleedin' lot I'll have to throw into the pond a fillet of haddock each night - that'll be much cheaper.

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J.C. - I read and re-read my line before
printing and even considered <"IN" silent rhyme> but it wasn't quite what I sought to say. As a lyricist I "sang" my line to myself and it sounded OK. I hear what you say but nothing's perfect.

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I agree with MCN (the poet, not Motor Cycle News).
Very evocative and clever how you use words to suggest smells.
Versatile too, as I know you've done a fair amount of excellent rhythmic stuff.

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"If my brother-in-law, a "Gooners" man,
Like poetry as much, he'd be a fan!!"
Short - and right on the money.

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At best you'll get moved on!
Nice image of "breath like smoke upon the air".
I thought the line "Up and down to a silent rhyme" was a bit awkward rhythmically - it needed a quaver to work.
(Nothing wrong with Quavers, although I prefer Cheesy Puffs)

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There are reminders here of Laurence Binyon's poem "The Burning of the Leaves" and that is one of my favourites.

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