Intriguing. I thought she was going to get hit by lightning at the end

Comment is about for all the men I love (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Cheers Dave-ohh! John Lee Hooker was the Man round the Manchester clubs-in the thar days-What a scene to have had the very good fortune of being in! fab gear Man! get my mojo out in a bit-sniff sniff! Stef.

Comment is about David Cooke (poet profile)

Original item by David Cooke

Can but agree with the others. Terrific. A hen harrier - lucky you.

Comment is about Up The Tops (blog)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

It is isn't it. I love mine too.

Comment is about Mmmmmm (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Cate is spot on in saying that the tight style and repetition reflects the drudgery of poverty. The style is as restricted as the lifestyle. Excellent poem Cynthia - we all need reminding regularly what is out there.

Comment is about Poverty Is (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

another great poem ann - I love the way the poem turns a corner with "hands tied gently....."perfect.

Comment is about le weekend (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

We decorate Ann's poem well with the Eiffel Tower and a bottle of
(what I presume to be) French Merlot ; )

Ummm... Make that a GREAT second best!

Comment is about le weekend (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Isobel - you have to go back and change that memory - it's one of the most beautiful, interesting, glorious cities in the world!
Though the only experience I had there that echoed yours Ann, was the coffee... interesting memory.
Cx

Comment is about le weekend (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Good evening Kath-some people have probs etc with sad poems-me?-no way,I,m open to all aspects of life and death-poetry(I think)has to include all.Sombre image this poem,but well worded-re my comment on being regretful about the past-I have two poems done quite a bit ago-on sameish subject-apologetic to family etc-would love your opinion-one called'Tonight Matthew'-and-'Went the day well?'if you prefer not-absolutely no probs-whenever you like-thanks-Stefan-x

Comment is about Lie in wait (blog)

I only have bad memories of the Gare du Nord Francine - plus an awful stint as an au pair on the outskirts where I was totally mis-used by the family but didn't have the confidence to put my foot down or walk out...

I'd love to return one day and have a similar experience to Ann! If that never happens - you would make a good second best Francine! LOL -
I'm sure it wouldn't take us long to find company anyway - just so long as we went somewhere a bit more upmarket than the Gare du Nord!

Sorry to hijack your poem Ann - it just brought back a flood of memories - mine all to clear, unfortunately.

Comment is about le weekend (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Eh ben Isobel...
On retournera ensemble un jour.
Il ne faut pas garder des mauvais souvenirs de Paris... ça ne se fait pas !

Comment is about le weekend (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Well it doesn't hold good memories for me. I remember missing the last train home there. After passing up on a rather dubious offer from the station master, I ended up sharing a room with 2 other students I'd never met before (one male) in a grotty little hotel. I slept with my clothes on, thinking I might wake up with a knife to my throat - the stress of it all!

Your week-end sounded like a lorra lorra fun...

Comment is about le weekend (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Glad you enjoyed the Kingfisher poem, Rachel. A similar thing happened to me: I carefully prepared to take a picture of an immobile heron on the far side of the canal, poised to seize a fish, marvelling at its ability to keep so still, only to discover it was a plastic one. I need new glasses.
Thanks too for commenting on Eating in Private, and feeling it so much. It's intended to be part of a sequence, which I think you may be embarked on too, with your "war at sea" poems. I'm always looking forward to the next one. You have the knack of referring the past to the present, which maybe I need to do more with mine. Greg

Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

Mmmm... Ce poème provoque de bons souvenirs...

Comment is about le weekend (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Hello Cate

How lovely your comments are, almost as sad as the poem.

I agree with every thing you say, the world becomes a frightening place for many of us as we grow confused and infirm.

Thank you once again.

Augusta xx

Comment is about Cate (poet profile)

Original item by Cate

Thank you Anne for reading my poem reference to my grandfather's Scrotum. and in particular the last line.

You are very encouraging and ... prolific...you probably written another ten poems becuse the clocks have gone forward affording you more datlight thinking time.... whoops... another poem... oh here comes another...

lucky girl it takes me ages.

Thanks again
Augusta xx

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

OI! Gladdrags! patum peperium-what disgusting language to use on Palm Sunday-wot I don,t understand anyway-heehee....ta chuck for chukkin' us a comment on me dicky..bird poo-em....in your neck of the woods(more or less,this week-Funky Fleetwood for four days-in caravan-now theres luxury!keep yer snow shoes handy-more on the way-'they' say! wot-not-a-skorcha!brrrr-Stef-xx

Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

Good afternoon Isobel,

Thank you for grappling with my grandfathers scrotum.

I would very much like to produce a self published book of my poetry... and 'Bollocks' might well be the Title although many of my poems do include reference to ladies gentalia... now I wonder what a combination of the two might be...

I'm open, as always, to suggestions.

Augusta

August

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

I admire the fact that you are trying out different poetic forms
Cynthia - It is interesting to see and read. What Poverty is, can be different for everyone - I really like the last verse as it is a universal feeling and says it all.

Comment is about Poverty Is (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thank you so much Cynthia for taking the time to comment on my Granfather's scrotum.

Augusta xx

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hey Max, great to see you on here
rach
x

Comment is about Max Wallis (poet profile)

Original item by Max Wallis

Thanks Greg, my grandad's ship was partly responsible for the sinking of the Scharnhorst and it was an abomination to him that they'd killed cadets.(the sailors didn't know till later) Thanks hugely for the comments, they really are appreciated.

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

Original item by Greg Freeman

I think the one on the right is a bloke Steffie, (not sure where his hand is goin') but he has more blokey legs. I love the video (not sure about Kate as a small boy(?) in a dodgy wig but Donald Sutherland is so gorgeous! And it reminds me of all the men who are heroic and clever and inventive and wonderful. Like my dad and my partner (and you of course! ;-))xx

Comment is about for all the men I love (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Yep a truly fishy tale you`re quite right to fin ish!! oooops sos I just cant resist a pun!
Cate xx

Comment is about Brrrh! (blog)

Original item by Dave Carr

I love the general theme and the idea of this Cynthia.
My 'favourite' stanzas are 4, 6, 7, 8 and the final one because they are the ones which touched my heart.
The whole thing though is very thought provoking. The only one i thought was a little out of place is the second one. Some people do still enjoy hunting for berries and wild greens just for the sheer pleasure.

Janet.x

Comment is about Poverty Is (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

A lovely well observed piece Rachel with some very clever words. A thousand jelly eyes is great although the obscenity of frogspawn didn't sound right to me. Loved the feel of the birds and the almost surreal entrance of minis to what is a superb natural scene. Perhaps your best work for my liking.

Comment is about Up The Tops (blog)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

One word for me sums this poem up-WOWSERS!(back to my drawing board)sniff sniff-yeah,let us not forget eh Rach.Stefan-x

Comment is about Remembering The Scharnhorst (blog)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

Keenly felt, tears in the wind. You show great empathy with moments many years ago, Rachel

Comment is about Remembering The Scharnhorst (blog)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

Wow, Rachel, this is absolutely the business! So well-observed, nature in tooth and claw, plus Minis. I've been waiting for you to introduce birds into your poems. The whole thing is like an "ice cold gulp of water." What a landscape. Marvellous. Greg

Comment is about Up The Tops (blog)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

Isobel, thanks for your kind remarks on Unexpected Steps. I retired over a year ago and the menagerie is somewhat depleted, 2 dogs, 4 cats and a rabbit. Can't seem to get rid of the kids, though.

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Hi Cynthia, Liked this idea. Some great and strange subject matter. the sausages in crystal really put things nicely into perspective. also liked the idea that poverty is relative and to some it maybe going without caviar... to others going without food. maybe this could be explored further in another poem. Win

Comment is about Poverty Is (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Heel Ms Foxglove, a graphic novel is a comic! Pictures (they call it 'artwork') and words (they call them 'captions')... I imagine the medium might appeal to you.

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Ah!! so there you beautifully are-was it worth mithering you back again? too bloody right!(aw swearing on Palm Sunday)as to the poem? mmmmmm...not bad-not bad! just flippin brill! now put that navel down(save me the cheese!)loadsa love-Steffamungus-xx

Comment is about Up The Tops (blog)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

An entertaining read Ray. I agree with Janet - this is so off the wall but there is a thread of something else running through it that intrigues you. I love rhyme too - it makes poetry musical and definitely more performance friendly.

Comment is about Unexpected Steps (blog)

Shock me - what happens when you get to 0 - Apocalypse Now?

Comment is about Paper (blog)

Original item by John Togher

Stan's gloves definitely not in my car. I had to empty it recently cos it was going in for repairs. I found an awful lot of rubbish and things I'd forgotten I had - but no leather gloves. If they weren't at the Green Room, he may have dropped them en route to the car. I'm always doing things like that - often purses! Will defo make it to Waterside again - it was a good night. Hope you are better. xx

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hi Cynthia, thanks for your comment on The Soldier. I think if you write about something you are passionate about, your message will inevitably be clear as day.

- Josh

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

I love this.
x

Comment is about Poverty Is (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Isobel, I was ill on Tuesday gone, and missed the first Waterside in ages. Sounded like a great evening. Maybe it will take some of the 'anti' out of the venue. I see I also missed you and Janet. My loss. Speaking of - Stan still seriously wonders if his only leather gloves might not be in your car - somewhere. Did you check any further?

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Thanks Ann,I have been introspective and a wee bit crap of late....feeling springier now so hopefully I'm on the up again. My mum likes that poem too, I will make Chris take me up there again today...see what's changed this sunday!
xxx

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Sorry Cynthia. I didn't realise it was in haiku format - that explains it. I wasn't saying verse 3 was weak. I just found it odd to end a line with 'kind fishermen toss' - maybe because I have a mind like a sewer!

I think that formal structure is sometimes too restrictive. For me it isn't always the best way to develop a poem or explore a theme. Maybe that is because my mind likes to be free and I find all kinds of structure a bit oppressive LOL! Someone psychoanalyse me.....

Comment is about Poverty Is (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Excellent poem Dave - I agree with what others have said. Visiting Pompeii is a powerful experience with the plaster casts of people especially moving. It makes you wonder what people would make of our world in 2000 years if it was frozen in time.

Vesuvius will apparently blow again but no-one knows when. Some scientists think it's overdue and there's a lot more people living below it now. Apparently the governmemnt is having trouble persuading people to move

Comment is about Pompeii (blog)

Original item by Dave Carr

Unless I have goofed, these stanzas are in strict haiku format as regards number of syllables per line; not necessarily though in the truest spirit of the form.

Stanza 3 IS weak.

Comment is about Poverty Is (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Ha ha - and up to its usual mischief. If only I could get to have the 3 wishes...

Comment is about Winston Plowes (poet profile)

Original item by Winston Plowes

That doesn't surprise me Dave. This really has to be read to be appreciated - though you may find it works better in a non public house poetry venue.
I have occasionally managed to breathe life into page poetry but it is hard. You are lucky to be able to turn your hand equally to page and performance.

Comment is about Pompeii (blog)

Original item by Dave Carr

Full bodied and a little too vintage, unfortunately.... LOL xx

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Ah the Genie is out of the bottle!

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Hi John, good to see this developing on the page. It has the trademark Togher clinical medical/sexual procedure written all over it. lol Win

Comment is about Paper (blog)

Original item by John Togher

11 hours.

Comment is about Paper (blog)

Original item by John Togher

What a great poem Rach! Really brill! I've missed you, this is worth the wait. You are fab! xx

Comment is about Up The Tops (blog)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery