Spring! Spring! Spring!
The bells ring, ring, ring!
I am in the park under the tree.
I am free, free, free!
The crows are sitting in the tree,
They are also free, free, free.
Nothing clever comes into my head,
Only foolish things instead.
More than that!
Those critters that are on the tree
They have more freedom than me.
They litter, they throw on my head.
Should I cry or be glad?
©Larisa Rzhepishevska
Comment is about Should I Сry Or Be Glad? (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
Thanks you for the bouquet of lovely flowers Red, Hugh, Stephen. Aisha, Holden and David. Very much appreciated. I will now look you all up and read your words too. 😊
Comment is about Counting Sleep (blog)
Original item by Frances Macaulay Forde
Thanks @Rolph David 🌷... it seems only a few get the alignment. But we can't please absolutely every one🌷🕊️🙏🏻
Comment is about constants of change (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
...who fell in love @Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh 🌷🕊️🙏🏻
Comment is about constants of change (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Hi Reggie,
Thanks for checking in and for the comments.
I'm not sure that I ended on an optmistic note though.
All the best,
David
Comment is about Moses meets Mo (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thanks Stephen
You sound like my kind of next-door
neighbour Uilleam 💕
Comment is about The Heat is On (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
I've seen this story, Rolph.
But there's nothing unsurprising about the way those lies were covered in the UK.
The poison - spreading, race-baiting Toryrag was up to its usual standard, mendacity oozing from every line.
Comment is about Nothing Embarrasses This Man (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
What a line: Friendship is a theorem unbroken - forever true.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about constants of change (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Speaking of shrouds, David:
What kind of sick mentality is it, which in the guise of sending (only a trickle to date) trucks of aid to two million 2,000,000 starving people has just sent two trucks full of burial shrouds? I kid you not.
The scum in the UK government who continue to give their support to those doing these things, should be shown up for what they are:
sick, depraved perverts.
Comment is about Moses meets Mo (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
I hope you didn't think my commment dismissive of your poem, Branwell.
I see some pitiful sights around town. most recently, a frail-looking woman who looked as though she had been given a beating.
The sad truth is that mental health, and any other social services which once alleviated such suffering have been deliberately decimated in the name of political ideology.
Comment is about Introductory Matter (blog)
Original item by branwell kent
I admired the optimism in your last comment David...so I gave you a like!
Comment is about Moses meets Mo (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Sarah pritchard
Fri 23rd May 2025 08:57
Fantastic read, fabulous winning poem & wonderous selections! Poetry at its best! 💛💗♥️💜💚💙
Comment is about Di Slaney wins Write Out Loud’s ‘Echoes’ competition with ‘Dolly Parton’s wig’ - in memory of a ‘dear friend and inspiration’ (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Thus spake the mathematician?😏
Comment is about constants of change (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Thank you Naomi.
We must not lose hope for the sake of our children.
I was walking the other day, in what was a former industrial wasteland suffering two-hundred years of pollution and neglect.
Wildlife and flora now thrive in what has been transformed into a pleasant canalside parkland, mainly by volunteers teaming up with businesses. They have planted fruit trees at regular intervals, under which are solid benches on which we can rest. A most pleasant surprise!
💗🌷💐
Comment is about BIOLOGICAL DIVERSITY (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Thanks for the likes so far...
David
Comment is about Moses meets Mo (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Fri 23rd May 2025 05:49
Dear Hugh
This poetry is amazing and seems especially insightful to me because it talks about the problems I struggle with a lot, anxiety and anger.
Your comment on my latest work 'Home' brought me to your account and I see that you too acknowledge the importance of emotional stability. Thank you for sharing your views with this beautiful piece of work and for your encouraging comment on mine.
Comment is about Emotional health (blog)
Original item by hugh
This has a familiar feeling without being overwrought--excellent )
Comment is about Sven's soul funk (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Thanks kindly @Aisha Suleman 🌷very much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊️
Comment is about hair in the wind (blog)
Original item by Wimpole Street Devils
Thanks to all for the kind reception of this poem. You are all much appreciated 🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷
🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷
This means absolutely so much🕊️🙏🏻
Comment is about flight ready (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
So late...
I think there is an argument for angst.
Simply stated it says that clearly expressing a problem in words is the better part of the battle.
Clarity is the trick, though. Otherwise, it's lip service.
Comment is about Harm (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Next Exit, Interpol--
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=1hkLiB4MBkU&pp=ygUSaW50ZXJwb2wgbmV4dCBleGl0
"it's not for lack of love of the language that these films have no words. It's because, from my point of view, our language is in a state of vast humiliation. It no longer describes the world in which we live."
--Godfrey Reggio on the film, Koyaanisqatsi
Comment is about flashlight (blog)
Original item by Landi Cruz
Thank you, Greg.
I will always remember the conclusion of his pithy tribute to Arnold Ridley, aka Private Godfrey of Dad's Army :
'You were the old one,
Who always wanted to go to the toilet.'
Farewell, and much missed.
Comment is about Farewell to Barry Fantoni, creator of Private Eye’s EJ Thribb (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I'm not offended; mine are massive.💗
Comment is about The Heat is On (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
You have certainly written yourself back to wellness.A poem briliantly writen.Well done .
Comment is about Home (blog)
Original item by Mahira
Thu 22nd May 2025 16:43
This is such a beautiful poetry, Helene! I am very glad I came back to this site and visited your account particularly. In today's world, where there's so much hatred and animosity, these are the very words the heart yearns for. Words that assure one that love still exists, and is still thought of as the purest feeling by people.
Thank you for this assurance and thank you for your encouraging words on my latest work! Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Comment is about Intention (blog)
Original item by Hélène
Thank you, Aisha! Your poems are like a savory cup of coffee or tea. They pep me up!
Comment is about Ready, Set, Rise! (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Mental health challenges are daunting. Can we breathe, sing, and write our way back to wellness? Welcome back to poetry writing and reading, Mahira, and thanks for sharing your heartfelt poem. Poems live inside of us, and we are all connected. Sending love and well wishes.
Comment is about Home (blog)
Original item by Mahira
Thu 22nd May 2025 16:33
We truly have lost so much in our quest to urbanize. This poetry is a beautiful depiction of the gruesome consequences human greed and ambitions. Love it!
Comment is about HERE'S TO THE GREENERY (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thanks Graham,
David RL Moore
Comment is about Moses meets Mo (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thank you for sharing your thoughts RB - cheers!
Comment is about Dauntless (blog)
Original item by Mike McPeek
Thank you, once again, Rolph.
“This is not defence or right,”.
It never has been about that…and it didn’t begin on October the 7th 2024.
In the same year that the National Health Service appeared to resurrect the trappings of civilisation and social justice in UK society, saving both my mother’s life and my own, a descent into barbarity began, in the name of Western / USA colonialism, signed off by Balfour.
The project that was the Palestinian Nakba, continues to be enabled by abject cowardice, hypocrisy and lies on the part of the British establishment.
Comment is about No Land For Peace (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Says it all David! Bang on! One of your best, succinct and clear!
Comment is about Moses meets Mo (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Very effective and a little disturbing, Clare. The addiction or obligation to write has not caught up with me yet, not quite, but I see exactly what you mean.
Comment is about Succubus. (blog)
Original item by Clare
Those were the days when being a signalman was a career choice, Graham.
Comment is about CHIM CHIMINEY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Once upon a time it was a job all dads did themselves. The rods were handed down through the generations like Trigger’s Broom!
Comment is about CHIM CHIMINEY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Now in all Quality High Streets!
Welcome to the UK 2025.
Comment is about Introductory Matter (blog)
Original item by branwell kent
Carbon Removal Technician, I shouldn't wonder, Stephen.
Comment is about CHIM CHIMINEY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Not being a football fan, I jokingly complain in the pub: "all that fuss over a bag of wind"!
Gary Lineker, famous for his skill in kicking said bags of wind, has now upset the bags of wind / lies at the BBC known as "Auntie".
What qualities does a football player such as him posess which qualify him to give an honest, principled and accurate opinion on the current genocide in Gaza?
..................................................💗He's human!💗.................................................
Comment is about Haiku for 2025 [No.16. What Genocide?] (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh
'your poem inspired me to type this comment:'
Takes you to another place.
Bear withness to the mysterious humamind.
Painthings, poetick pixars.
Noetic nodes to blind.
Comment is about Farewell to the Presence (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Suburban erotica of the best kind, Nigel.
Comment is about The Heat is On (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Thanks for your likes
Red Brick Keshner
Reggie's Ghost
Uilleam
Holden
Hugh
Stephen A
Manish
John Coopey
and
Aisha.
Comment is about The Heat is On (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Well done, John. We had a chimney sweep who calls himself an 'entrepreneur artistique'. I expecting he's got sidelines, which probably don't include levitating with an umbrella.
Comment is about CHIM CHIMINEY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thank you, Uilleam and RBK. Nigel Farage once said, gloatingly, "you're not laughing now, are you?". On that basis, it's important to keep laughing!
And thanks to everyone who liked this poem.
Comment is about Giggle (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Rolph, your poem 'Farewell to the Presence' highlights the imagery of silence and loss in a deeply profound and consistent way. Your poem offers a strong sensory experience that truly made me feel the emptiness. Thank you, Rolph, for sharing that piece.
Comment is about Farewell to the Presence (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Thanks Uilleam
Thanks Reggie's Ghost
The heat is on even for poetry!
Comment is about The Heat is On (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
It seems I got off lightly, Rolph. (Don’t tell anybody, Uilleam, but I made up the story!)
Comment is about CHIM CHIMINEY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
The cutting down of olive trees - part of the ethnic cleansing operation euphemistically known as "mowing the lawn".
The architects of this monstrosity never wanted peace; that's why Netanyahu helped finance Hamas.
"Handing an olive branch" never was and never will be in his vocabulary.
Comment is about Insane. (blog)
Original item by Holden Moncrieff
Ha ha, yes theyre pesky characters!
Comment is about The Extra Terrestrial Poets (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
I too, have been having trouble with those aliens; the beer's not too bad; it's when they get on the top shelf that things get scary - they've got a thing about Glenfiddich, I think they're going to start a colony there!
😧
Comment is about The Extra Terrestrial Poets (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
Frances Macaulay Forde
Sat 24th May 2025 04:57
So true! 😊
Comment is about The Effort Is the Flame (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman