Profile image

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 25th Jan 2019 13:17

Delightful, beautifully expressed and uplifting. 'Be still and know that I am God' - wonderfully translated into your own experience, and honest. I so admire 'honest'.


Comment is about To know God (blog)

Original item by Hazel ettridge

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Fri 25th Jan 2019 12:55

An ageless message delicately put. Nicely done.

Comment is about Lonely Lady on a Tram Every Morning (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Profile image

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 25th Jan 2019 12:32

'genteel'? You've got to be joking!

Comment is about My neighbour had a fluffy cat. (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 25th Jan 2019 12:28

Delightful, and insightful.

Comment is about Due back soon. (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

John Coopey

Fri 25th Jan 2019 08:55

I had two “aunties”, MC, who were best friends. Actually, one was my auntie and the other her friend. They lived together and slept together at my grandma’s. It was only when I was in my 40’s that I cottoned on!

Comment is about I DON'T MIND HELPING OUT IF THEY GET BUSY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Profile image

Don Matthews

Fri 25th Jan 2019 06:41

I can also rhyme
I do it all the time
But don't describe mine with an 'f____'
Don't wallow in the grime ?

Comment is about The Temple Builder and the Pimp Cup (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Big Sal

Fri 25th Jan 2019 01:24

I’m of the same mind. And I think this is one of the first times I’ve heard you use ‘bad’ language. Now it’ll surely snow.

Comment is about Property is theft (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Big Sal

Fri 25th Jan 2019 00:42

There you are.?

Comment is about Attila the Stockbroker (photo)

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Fri 25th Jan 2019 00:39

I enjoyed the repetitive reference to "busy" in this blog.
I'm beginning to wonder about Sooty and Sweep now!

Comment is about I DON'T MIND HELPING OUT IF THEY GET BUSY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Fri 25th Jan 2019 00:34

You're either downright nosy - or there yourself. ?
In my 8th decade I have the following to say -
If you keep yourself in self-help health
You won't be pillaging others' pelf.

Comment is about Due back soon. (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Big Sal

Fri 25th Jan 2019 00:03

Reminds me of a lesson from the Coen Brothers.?

Comment is about Due back soon. (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

Don Matthews

Thu 24th Jan 2019 23:14

Common sense is gone dk
Replaced by common dumb
Gullible and dumb-like
Ready to succumb

You gotta have a new one
To keep up with the Jones
Nah, you're old one's no good
I'm 'fraid it's not two-tone

No it isn't common sense
To keep what does still work
We have to buy from sellers
To satisfy their perks ?

Comment is about Common Sense (blog)

Original item by d.knape

Profile image

Don Matthews

Thu 24th Jan 2019 22:58

I believe you've kicked out a belief
Said "So long mate, I just don't need you"
You're now in a state of non-beliefness
I hope this works well for you too ?


Comment is about BELIEF (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Big Sal

Thu 24th Jan 2019 22:07

To oversee such a journey is poetry itself.?

Comment is about Enoughness (blog)

Original item by Vautaw

Big Sal

Thu 24th Jan 2019 21:59

Positivity in all things.?

Comment is about Bestselling poet Rupi Kaur leads way as poetry sales soar by 12% (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Big Sal

Thu 24th Jan 2019 21:56

Love those last two lines. Inscriptions upon an eternal mind.

Pure excellence.?

Comment is about Angelus Bell (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Big Sal

Thu 24th Jan 2019 21:55

That's ironic as hell that people are complaining that the site is 'going downhill', yet when one of the best writers on the site gets Poem of the Week no one shows up to say a thing.

Well, here's a second congratulations on behalf of people that actually notice things.

WELL DONE RUBY.?

Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘Half-hearted’ by Ruby (article)

Original item by steve pottinger

Profile image

Dave Caplan

Thu 24th Jan 2019 21:05

Jennifer you've coined a new word...brilliant.
I will definitely find an excuse to use it.
Gives me a pre-mortgasm just thinking about it !

P.S.
The answer to the age-old question "How was it for you?"
"Rotten."

Comment is about Is there sex after death ? (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

Dave Caplan

Thu 24th Jan 2019 20:26

Damn it...I should remember that , but I don't.
Probably because most winters up north are severe.

I have seen photos of south east england during the winter of 1962. Spectacular shots of the frozen sea at Herne Bay and even an amazing gigantic frozen wave at Whitstable in 1940.

Thanks for re-kindling my interest.

P.S. Have you tried to buy a pair of thermal gloves recently ?
I think they are "changing hands" at black-market prices.

Comment is about TIME TRAVEL (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Profile image

raypool

Thu 24th Jan 2019 20:11

Sorry I didn't get back to you earlier David. We have to treasure our odd corners - I guess the tourists like them too - there will be imitators and attempts to hijack them. Think of the Queen Mary and London Bridge for example.

Cheers, Ray

Comment is about INSPIRATION (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Profile image

raypool

Thu 24th Jan 2019 20:05

Thanks for liking my Drinker poem Jennifer. I hope you're enjoying the site at the moment, I'm afraid I'm not. It feels to me like a graffiti site; I've said it now. Inspiration is hard to find.

All the best, Ray

Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)

Original item by Jennifer Malden

Profile image

jennifer Malden

Thu 24th Jan 2019 19:27

Presumably she might have mortgasms?

Jennifer

Comment is about Is there sex after death ? (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

Alan Travis Braddock

Thu 24th Jan 2019 18:22

Thanks Po & Sal. I wrote it at the time of a previous eclipse, which I managed to snap from our house, looking through a spruce tree in the neighbours garden. BUt I now realise that I was thinking.of an eclipse of the SUN, which does silence all the birds.... took me about four years to realise that! (Thinks.... prat!)

Comment is about Watching the Eclipse (blog)

Original item by Alan Travis Braddock

Profile image

victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 24th Jan 2019 18:12

Nothing quite measures up to a walk in the woods to find our place in the world. Beautiful verse about two things I hold dear. Thanks for sharing. ?

Comment is about To know God (blog)

Original item by Hazel ettridge

Profile image

Stu Buck

Thu 24th Jan 2019 17:50

anything that gets young people reading poetry is a good thing. not a fan of kaur, read through milk and honey and found it paper thin, but if a single person uses it as a gateway to sharon olds, charles bukowski or walt whitman, it can only be a positive thing.

Comment is about Bestselling poet Rupi Kaur leads way as poetry sales soar by 12% (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Profile image

Rich

Thu 24th Jan 2019 17:38

Couldn't agree more.

Comment is about To know God (blog)

Original item by Hazel ettridge

Profile image

Rich

Thu 24th Jan 2019 17:35

Thanks everyone for all your comments - it's really encouraging, so thank you. ?

Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘Potential’ by Rich (article)

Original item by steve pottinger

Profile image

Bonaparte's

Thu 24th Jan 2019 17:08

Hello stop. I am writing stop. via telegram stop. so as not to stop. add to your upset at the use of phones stop.

Don't be lonely, I read your lovely poem on a busy street in London on my phone. Via technology you reached out and climbed inside my head! Isn't that wonderful.

Comment is about ELDERS (blog)

Original item by Ty

Profile image

victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 24th Jan 2019 16:57

Spending days (and nights) on the floor reading poems and having rhymic flings sounds like poets gone wild to me. Let us all flock to the Temple from now until spring! ?

Comment is about Latest Temple Publicity Material (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Profile image

Bonaparte's

Thu 24th Jan 2019 16:16

I enjoyed this poem.

Comment is about To know God (blog)

Original item by Hazel ettridge

Profile image

Dragan Bozilov

Thu 24th Jan 2019 14:05

Thanks! ?.. I will! :)

Comment is about Try (blog)

Original item by Dragan Bozilov

Profile image

Robert C Gaulke

Thu 24th Jan 2019 11:44

Thanks!

Comment is about Thursdays at the expensive cafe (blog)

Original item by Robert C Gaulke

Big Sal

Thu 24th Jan 2019 10:49

Powerful as a shot of mezcal.?

Comment is about Jelousy (blog)

Original item by Shonda Hurley Bell

Profile image

Shuchi Batra

Thu 24th Jan 2019 10:36

Thanks Big Sal....
?

Comment is about Into the Woods (blog)

Original item by Shuchi Batra

Big Sal

Thu 24th Jan 2019 10:18

I myself would settle for a good ol' book of rhymes and a pimp cup.?

Comment is about Latest Temple Publicity Material (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Big Sal

Thu 24th Jan 2019 10:07

Great piece. Excellent title too.?

Comment is about Into the Woods (blog)

Original item by Shuchi Batra

Profile image

Don Matthews

Thu 24th Jan 2019 09:14

It may have sounded cool Dave
In essence it was hot
A lovely pair round manly ass
(How long before he shot?)

(Shit Don you'll be kicked out of WOL - too risque
It's all your your fault Dave)

Now where was I....?

Now you can tell the kiddy
Them kiddywinks at school
That Don your friendly poet
Says no it isn't cool ?

Comment is about Innocence (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

Dave Caplan

Thu 24th Jan 2019 08:21

Spoken like a true member of the human race.
Literature and education will ultimately prevail.

Comment is about Only literature (blog)

Original item by Hasmukh Mehta

Profile image

Shuchi Batra

Thu 24th Jan 2019 07:32

hahahaha... I laughed out loud..

Shuchi

Comment is about Innocence (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

Dragan Bozilov

Thu 24th Jan 2019 00:22

Astonishing!

Comment is about Rose Colored Reality (blog)

Original item by Vautaw

Profile image

Dragan Bozilov

Thu 24th Jan 2019 00:14

Thanks a lot!!

Comment is about Try (blog)

Original item by Dragan Bozilov

Profile image

victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 23:14

Beautiful lyrics and melody. Transcendent. ?

Comment is about Try (blog)

Original item by Dragan Bozilov

Big Sal

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 20:05

Positive vibes!??

Comment is about Gratitude (blog)

Original item by BIG FISH

Big Sal

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 20:04

That’s even more hilarious than people pissed off over other people’s poetry.

Nicely done, David.??

Comment is about British Passion (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

Stu Buck

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 19:53

all i could think of when i read this beautiful lunacy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nuHI9-_Moig

Comment is about British Passion (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

raypool

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 19:22

We only see what we wish to see and the rest is illusion or fusion. Ray

Comment is about Rose Colored Reality (blog)

Original item by Vautaw

Profile image

raypool

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 19:17

Genius .how can we follow this?

Comment is about British Passion (blog)

Original item by David Gabriel Caplan

Profile image

victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 18:51

Me too! Isn't life amazing? Thanks for the reminder! ?

Comment is about Gratitude (blog)

Original item by BIG FISH

Profile image

Dragan Bozilov

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 18:18

Thanks!

Comment is about Tokyo Lights (blog)

Original item by Dragan Bozilov

Profile image

jennifer Malden

Wed 23rd Jan 2019 18:16

Hiya D K. Have an ear from each, and am quite happy with that!!!!! Thanks for reading my stuff.

Jennifer

Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)

Original item by d.knape

More Comments

◄ Prev123 … 307 … 614 … 921 … 12171218121912201221 … 1228 … 1535 … 1842 … 2149 … 2456 … 2763 … 306230633064Next ►

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message