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John Botterill

Tue 27th Jun 2023 13:03

Thanks Stephen and Graham, love the comments. I think Mr Ben suits me very well haha. Mr Hyde too, who knows what an extra pint might do 😂

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Russell Jacklin

Tue 27th Jun 2023 12:22

Thank you all, always here to offer my pearls

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 27th Jun 2023 10:22

"Deep into right wing territory"

What's right wing RG?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 27th Jun 2023 10:09

Forgive my stupidity MC, but I'm not sure what you're saying:

" Tey a poem from a viewpoint that's alien to you. It might be
a challenge but useful for seeing another POV."

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 27th Jun 2023 09:16

Oh crikey! - my fact checking up the swanee.
Thanks for that Greg.
but he's still good enough for me.😉

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Greg Freeman

Tue 27th Jun 2023 09:02

Small pedant's point, Uilleam ... Larkin was never laureate. He turned down Mrs Thatcher's invitation, a year or so before he died.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 27th Jun 2023 08:52

I was rather thinking of Mr Ben! Remember him and the magic shop?

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 27th Jun 2023 08:14

Outstanding, John. I like the idea that every day 'a different man is putting on my clothes'. Perhaps I should try that! Maybe we are all Jekyll, Hyde and someone else.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 27th Jun 2023 08:08

My thanks to Stephen and Kevin for the comments. They are greatly appreciated.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 27th Jun 2023 07:08

the bog - wherein is sometimes found preserved that which might otherwise have been lost.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 27th Jun 2023 07:03

A great contribution to this morning's collection words of wisdom on WOL!

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 27th Jun 2023 04:31

Brilliantly written, JD. Powerful and inspiring. I'm gonna save this.
Thank you.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 27th Jun 2023 04:26

Thanks you for making me travel through your poem. Very well described and executed.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 27th Jun 2023 04:22

"There's beauty in little things."
"It's the small things that really matter."

Are the two phrases or quotes that I truly believed and followed. Your poem has just defined it all more descriptively. I absolutely enjoyed reading this, Hélèna.

Thank you.

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John Botterill

Mon 26th Jun 2023 19:37

Great advice expertly conveyed, JD. I will attempt to control my wayward mind 😀

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John Botterill

Mon 26th Jun 2023 17:10

A beautiful, powerful anthem of how good can triumph over apparently insurmountable evil forces. Another winner, Clare. Love it! 💪

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John Botterill

Mon 26th Jun 2023 16:45

Thanks so much to so many poets whose work I greatly admire: Clare, Stella, Manish and Stephen A, I salute you! 😎 I acknowledge, too, my debt to Vernon Scannell. This might become a theme, you never know! 😂
Thanks for the likes : Nigel, Russell, K. Lynn and Helene 😀

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 26th Jun 2023 16:44

JC - I take the view that there was a realisation the post-WW2
era and all that was sacrificed was a turning-point for the days
of empire and steps were taken accordingly in many areas to
arrange for that eventuality. With regard to the Suez Canal,
this was an international waterway upon which many nations
relied but where both the UK and France had a front=row
interest historically. The empire has taken a revisionist bashing
with the benefit of hindsight but its relevance is still apparent
in the existence of today's Commonwealth membership, some
of which were'nt even originally involved!

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Nigel Astell

Mon 26th Jun 2023 15:47

She never
Did say
He never
Dare ask.❤

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Tom

Mon 26th Jun 2023 13:23

This is epic in the best possible way. Great writing Tom. Very much enjoyed. Also want to read Clare's piece.

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Tom

Mon 26th Jun 2023 13:19

Thank you Keith, Stephen, Stephen and Kevin for your lovely and encouraging comments. It feels good to be writing again after a dry spell.

Thanks also to Helene, Hugh, John and K Lynn for the likes and all of you for reading.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 26th Jun 2023 13:11

Here's some good losers:
"James Jordan hits out at England for being 'sore losers' after taking their medals off"
https://www.express.co.uk/celebrity-news/1461521/james-jordan-England-players-refuse-medals-Italy-Euro-2020-final-news-latest
https://rugby365.com/countries/england/video-england-stars-are-sore-losers/
😕

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 26th Jun 2023 12:23

Expertly written, John. And so true! Love it! 🌈

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 26th Jun 2023 06:59

You had commented earlier on one of my poem that I was on a cracking form, but it's you who are on a mind-blowing cracking form, John B. Loved this one!😄

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winds solar

Sun 25th Jun 2023 23:31

John in case you are wondering where my poem ' Away from the world' is I have decided to rewrite it into a lengthier version later on and hopefully enter it along with some of my earlier and up and coming poems for submission to a publisher

but thanks again for the lovely comment onwards and upwards!

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winds solar

Sun 25th Jun 2023 22:25

John I have just read this to my Grandfather and he could not stop laughing and said to tell you welcome to the club! 😂 adding that it was indeed a very good poem and we both thank you 👍👍

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Clare

Sun 25th Jun 2023 22:14

John, in my humble opinion, this is one of the best poems you have given us to date - And that is saying something!! A fabulous insight into a world we rarely see. I love it! Thank you. 💕

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John Botterill

Sun 25th Jun 2023 22:04

I agree with Keith. You have captured something remarkable in this poem. It seems to strip humanity down to our essential uncertainty. Great poem. 😎

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Dilsonn A. Mejía

Sun 25th Jun 2023 22:01

Thank you Russell, that means a lot to me, I'm glad you liked it.

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John Botterill

Sun 25th Jun 2023 21:46

A great tribute to a wonderful institution, Keith. Congratulations 👍
And we need to use them or lose them as Uilleam suggests.

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Russell Jacklin

Sun 25th Jun 2023 19:36

brilliant, I am the type of poet where, although one verse will do, I have to write ten, however, I really appreciate your work

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Russell Jacklin

Sun 25th Jun 2023 19:33

I am only a Mental health first-aider but I have heard similar conversations and they touch me deeply. I hope you are ok anyway.

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Russell Jacklin

Sun 25th Jun 2023 19:30

I'm the last of my line as well. This is a great conversation, beautiful.

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Russell Jacklin

Sun 25th Jun 2023 19:27

Wow, the imagery of falling in love with the boy from the wrong side of town, loved every image, it made me hold my breath as I read
Thank you

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John Marks

Sun 25th Jun 2023 18:55

Thank you Bethany, Clare, Stephen and n. I think (hope) that they compliment each other Stephen.

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John Coopey

Sun 25th Jun 2023 18:08

I don’t understand too much of your response, MC, although I think “adjusting its position” is probably a euphemism for “losing”. So what would the Empire have looked like if Britain had retained control of Suez?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 25th Jun 2023 17:10

Keith and Kevin - thanks for the comments; It's a sniper's job to be accurate! Thanks also for
the "likes" for these lines.
It's an unsettling feeling lying prone with the distant target in
the crosswires of the rifle sight, pulling the trigger and seeing
the hole signalled in the man-sized head and shoulders. There
is an uneasy thought that one is playing "God" with another's
life, removed from guilt by distance! Hard to explain but I can
put it no better than that.

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keith jeffries

Sun 25th Jun 2023 17:10

Stephen, you have branched out with this incredible poem. It had me transfixed. I can't quite get over it. A poem of distinction with under currents. My imagination was held captive. Do you have anymore?
Great.
Thanks
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 25th Jun 2023 16:34

Somewhere, I have old contemporary press cuttings about those
days (found in an auction). There was a concentrated political
concern about the changes and limitations that Nasser's action
over the Suez canal (wasn't that waterway the brilliant
conception from a French designer?) would see decisions
made about navigation that indicated restrictions inimical to
multi-national shipping that used the canal? It was a trading
link that affected more than just the nations that took action to
prevent it. It's a fascinating thing to wonder what would have
resulted had that action succeeded? But the times, they were a'changing for such police actions, with GB adjusting its
position in places like Malaya and the French suffering defeat
in a certain far east colony before the US found their own
trouble there.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 25th Jun 2023 16:17

History tells us that GB Ltd. have always been in it for the long haul. Give Brexit time, then we'll see. But I remain optimistic
that going for it was always a better choice than having our
trading and socio/political decisions made for us by a restless conglomeration with their own interests. The world is still
out there beyond that frequently warring web of disputatious
activity across the Channel where even our closest neighbour
is hardly representative of any particular feelings of bonhomie,
except when it suits them. 🎃

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Sun 25th Jun 2023 14:48

Love this Helene and yes never desert the health of the soul or the spirit if you wish to maintain a happy life I say.

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Telboy

Sun 25th Jun 2023 13:57

The Brits were always known as good losers. Brexit changed all that.

Telboy in Henschotermeer.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 25th Jun 2023 13:03

Beautifully written, Tom 🌈

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 25th Jun 2023 13:01

A comforting, rosey read. Beautifully described, Keith 🌈

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 25th Jun 2023 12:55

Wonderful 🌈

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Clare

Sun 25th Jun 2023 12:53

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 25th Jun 2023 12:42

I love this, John. And, the song compliments it beautifully (or does the poem compliment the song?)Thanks 🌈

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 25th Jun 2023 12:31

Powerfully understated. Brilliant, as usual, Stephen 👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 25th Jun 2023 12:21

Yes! Wonderful rhyming, generation defining! Lovely stuff, John 🌈

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 25th Jun 2023 12:14

A strong piece, Clare. 👏

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