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Yanma Hidayah

Mon 5th May 2025 17:26

@Freda, you made me feel like I was traveling through time and space. I felt as if I were right there with you, walking through memories that are both tender and haunting. Your poem is so evocative, full of vivid little details and such a strong atmosphere. Thank you for sharing such a captivating piece. I truly enjoyed it.

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Yanma Hidayah

Mon 5th May 2025 17:11

Dear Rolph,
Thank you so much for your thoughtful words. I completely agree with your phrase, “spiritual alignment that makes love worth the risk of pain.” I've heard stories that in marriage, the feeling of being in love might only last for four or five years. After that, many couples stay together—often for the sake of their children and the possibility of one partner falling in love with someone else can be quite real.

Personally and I believe many people feel the same, we often hope that marriage is a once-in-a-lifetime commitment. To preserve that, I believe we need to anchor it in a higher purpose. Sharing the same desire to be in the same heaven is the kind of ultimate goal that can transcend emotional ups and downs, temptations, and the wounds we may encounter along the way.

By viewing love as a spiritual journey rather than just a temporary emotion, we create space for loyalty, mutual growth, and the hope of an eternal reunion in the life beyond. From that perspective, love is not only about being happy in this world, but about completing the soul together.

Thank you once again, Rolph.
Warm regards,
Yanma

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 17:01

Dear Olivia,
Your poem "I hope it rains in hell" is deeply moving—raw, compassionate, and unflinchingly honest. The way you hold space for both hurt and humanity is powerful. It’s rare to read something that speaks so directly to grief, love, and the ache of seeing someone’s potential lost to their own ruin. The closing lines stayed with me—how rain becomes not forgiveness, but memory. That’s a truth that resonates.
Thank you for writing something so brave and tender.
Regards,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 14:48

Dear Yanma,
The journey from doubt and fear to the brave act of choosing love—thorns and all—is so poignantly expressed. I was especially moved by the line about sharing the same heaven; it captures the deep, spiritual alignment that makes love worth the risk of pain. This piece speaks to the courage it takes to love fully, even when we know it might hurt.

Regards,
Rolph

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 5th May 2025 14:03

Thanks for your likes:
hugh
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Yanma Hidayah

It would appear that the Conservative Party leader harbours a grudge against Kneecap, because they won their case against her efforts when she was a minister, to withdraw an arts grant of £14,250 from them, who have since donated the money to good community causes on both side of the politico / religious divide.

Seems like the snowflakes are melting because of a few hurty words: meanwhile two million 2,000,000 Palestinians are being deliberately starved in a genocide and ethnic cleansing. Why isn’t the Tory Party calling out Labour on this?

Please remind us again, Dear Leader,
1. which Tory donor was it who said that a black female MP “made him want to hate all black women” and that “she should be shot”?
2. which Energy Minister was it who warned against “cancelling anyone who ever said anything”?
Bitter and twisted, or what?

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 11:50

Dear Marla Joy,
The tension between relying on tomorrow and the fear that it might not always be there is something so relatable. The way you describe that "odd place" where hopes and dreams live, constantly shifting yet always present, resonates deeply. It’s a simple yet profound reflection on the nature of expectation and the fragility of the future.
Regards,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 11:24

Hello Red,
"Scaling Ivory Veils" is indeed a hauntingly evocative poem. The tension between truth and concealment, the quiet desperation in the search for meaning, and the visceral imagery of wounds that both scar and illuminate are deeply compelling. The way you capture the fragility of time, the weight of unspoken truths, and the tension of holding onto ideals while struggling with their reality is powerfully felt. The ivory form of lies piercing through, despite our best efforts to hide from them, leaves a lasting impression.
Regards,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 10:54

Dear Naomi,
Your poem "Soul of My Soul" is again beautifully profound. The imagery of two streams combining and becoming one is both powerful and moving, expressing a deep sense of unity and connection. The idea of being defined through another, as an echo and a shared breath, speaks to the sacredness of love and the profound bond between souls. It’s a poignant reflection on the intertwining of identities and the wholeness that comes with love.
Regards,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 09:32

Thank you Hugh and Red for your kind appreciation!
Have a nice day,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 09:31


Thank you, John — your sharp honesty is always appreciated. It’s important we continue to call out tastelessness when it masks deeper disrespect. I’m grateful you took the time to reflect on the piece.
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Rolph

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 09:30

Thank you, Uilleam, for your thoughtful and candid reflections. You’ve captured the deeper tragedy — not just in the actions of one man, but in the silence of those who should know better. When reverence is cast aside in the pursuit of power or wealth, the damage ripples far beyond politics. I'm grateful, as always, for your clarity and your voice.

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Rolph

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 09:27

Thank you, Uilleam, for your thoughtful and powerful response. Your words cut to the heart of a painful truth — that tyranny is not only a relic of history but a present threat sustained by silence and complicity. I deeply appreciate your willingness to speak plainly and stand firmly in conscience.
Regards,
Rolph



And thank you to Naomi, Stephen, Uilleam, Hugh and Red who took a moment to read, reflect on, or like the poem. Your quiet support matters more than you might think. In times where darkness can feel overwhelming, even a silent nod of recognition is a spark — and sparks, when gathered, can become light.
Take care,
cheerio,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 09:12

Hello Red,
As a loyal reader of my poetry: thanks again for your "Like".

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 5th May 2025 09:11

Thanks, Uilleam. Yes, I had a cap gun as a boy but for me it was fantasy, comic book stuff. Not the same for many kids, sadly, as you say.

It was one of those poems which comes and you're not entirely sure what it means. Who is the gunfighter? Jack Palance, Anthony Quinn, Clint Eastwood?
Or....no, it couldn't be HIM, could it?

And thanks to all who liked this poem.

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 09:05

Thank you for your support and "like": Naomi, Manish, Flyntland, K. Lynn, Holden Aisha, Stephen, Uilleam, Hugh and Red B.

To Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh:
Thank you, Uilleam — your image of a simple sail carrying us across oceans beautifully echoes the spirit of the poem.

To Stephen Gospage:
I appreciate your kind words, Stephen. I'm glad it gave you something to reflect on.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 5th May 2025 09:05

'The lightest of touch' is what we need today, Clare. Consideration, kindness and respect all shine through in this poem.

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Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 09:00

Yanma, Stephen, Hugh and Red B. - thanks again for your "like".

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 5th May 2025 02:56

Now this speaks to the place that I feel we all have and how very odd it would be, but needful and real. 🌷

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 5th May 2025 01:16

~on “revelatory” @Marla Joy 🕊hoping this brings a texture to its base form 🙏🏻🌷RBK

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 5th May 2025 01:06

@Marla Joy, that is quite the delicious challenge. Thank you for voicing it out🌷🕊🙏🏻

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Marla Joy

Sun 4th May 2025 19:08

RBK,
I love the depth your of your poetry. I wonder how a more personal, self reveal might add to your style.

Marla

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Marla Joy

Sun 4th May 2025 19:01

Claire,
I agree with Graham. This has a nice touch of personifying elements of nature, the moon, the wind. Nice.

Marla

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John Coopey

Sun 4th May 2025 17:57

As self-indulgent and tasteless as he can get, Rolph. Or maybe not. Perhaps there is still more base to come from him.

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Yanma Hidayah

Sun 4th May 2025 17:18

Hi, Hélène. I’d love to share a little perspective with you.
I was drawn to the opening lines of your poem: "Why so much debate about the existence of God? Does it really matter?"
Personally, I believe it does matter, because knowing where I come from and where I'm going helps shape the way I live my life. It gives me a sense of direction, meaning, and purpose.

I agree with you that love matters.
But for me, knowing God is actually what inspires me to love.
Because He calls me to be the best version of myself not for praise, but so I can share goodness with others.
Without knowing Him, I might not have a reason to share love at all.
Especially in a world so weighed down by pressure, I might just focus on surviving, without ever thinking about anyone else.

By the way, thank you, Hélène, for writing that poem.
It sparked a beautiful reflection and for that, I’m truly grateful.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 4th May 2025 17:08

It was a full house this popular club decided to enjoy the many poets that performed their poetry on stage making it a great night Ruth.😄
I loved getting up and joining in this Speak Easy poetry party which just seemed to get better and better.
Thanks for coming Ruth and maybe next time perhaps giving us a taste of your wonderful poetry.💗

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 4th May 2025 13:10

Several times over and done for such pretentious spouting. So much for luck 🍀🙏🏻🕊️

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sun 4th May 2025 11:51

It was great to put a face to your words the other night and see how you had the entire audience roaring with laughter - even the stoniest of faces cracked in the end 😁Well done on a fantastic performance!

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Clare

Sun 4th May 2025 11:02

Graham, Thank you so much for your comment. It really is something I value greatly - it is an honour to have my work appreciated by you. 🙏🏻

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 3rd May 2025 21:47

Claire , I am beginning to like your work very much., well done again for this.

G.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 19:09

It strikes me that Trump is falling apart mentally.
I find it hard to decide which is worse: the man himself and the danger he poses to the USA and the world,
or his so-called "advisors" who don't have the cojones to tell him: "I wouldn't do that if i were you, Sir".

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 19:01

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RBK
John FB Tucker.

The hypocrisy of our politicians who, through their silence or actions enable the genocide of the Palestinian people is truly nauseating.

...................................SAOIRSE DON PHALAISTÍN................................................

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John Coopey

Sat 3rd May 2025 18:41

Quite right, Stephen. My stock response to the populist view that “they’re all in it for themselves” is to suggest they stand for Parliament if they think they can do a better job. All they need is a deposit and to persuade 30,000 others to agree with them.
And I also take the view that our team doesn’t have all the wisdom and that the other team has all the numpties. On the quiet, I have a secret regard for the likes of Ken Clark and even Mother Teresa.

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 3rd May 2025 12:41

Thank you Stephen, and thank you for the read

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 10:35

Thanks, Stephen.
There are actually adults who enjoy dressing up as gunfighters.

As a little boy in the playground I ran around with a cap gun, shouting "bang-bang, you're dead'".
Fantasy for some children, grim reality for others.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 10:26

You've nailed it again Rolph.
Nothing is sacred except the aquisition of wealth.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 3rd May 2025 09:22

Strangely moving, JD. Well worth the read.

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 3rd May 2025 09:19

😂😂😂😂😂😁

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 3rd May 2025 09:09

There are a few who might qualify as 'not even a household name in their own household', John. But of course I can't remember who they are.

If I may be supremely boring, I could mention the many across all democracies who are well-intentioned and try to do a decent job. It doesn't always work out, but......

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 3rd May 2025 09:00

I agree with Marla. A gem of a poem. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 3rd May 2025 08:55

Good advice, Stephen. Enjoyed this a lot.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 3rd May 2025 08:49

A really good poem. It makes an instant impact.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 3rd May 2025 08:41

Thank you, Uilleam. I take your point, although in the light of recent developments we should perhaps be careful what (or who) we wish for!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 08:06

The food we discard, whilst others starve!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 08:04

An very evocative poem, Jonathan.
You've just resurrected a memory; the Leeds-Liverpool canal and Tom Pudding boats!
Always easy, sometimes beautiful, canalside walking.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 07:57

Thank you, Naomi.

Always money for wars,
none for hospital wards.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 07:54

Reminds me of the reduced-price cake at a so-called "continental" street market in town at the end of the day, thinking I was getting a bargain. It was tasteless dried-up yuk.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 3rd May 2025 07:39

Thanks for that JD.

As the song suggests:

"Love is in the err"...which of course, is human😐

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Kevin Raymond

Sat 3rd May 2025 03:28

Well done to you Graham.
Having recently given reading in public a go, myself. I found, that after the first couple of times... despite being a little nervous initially... reading ones work to an audience... eventually becomes an enjoyable experience, that one wants to perform again and again... as soon as is possible. Write on.

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Jonathan Humble

Fri 2nd May 2025 23:09

As a kid, in the early 'sixties I lived in a terrace next to the main railway line between Hull and Doncaster (the line which features in Whitsun Weddings). We played and made dens in the fireweed by the side of the track. I like to imagine Larkin (the summer poet) travelling through Goole and seeing these kids through his carriage window mucking around by the monkey bridge and sidings ... could have happened : )

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Greg Freeman

Fri 2nd May 2025 21:12

The train may be three-quarter empty, but Larkin is somewhere on it. A very fine poem, Jonathan. I did get to Hull a few years ago, on a train from Scarborough, mainly to pay homage to the station statue. But I have never been to Goole. Perhaps one day.

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