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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Tue 8th Dec 2015 15:16

Thanks Sir it is heartening to know there are poets who read all poems to give a valuable feedback.

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Tue 8th Dec 2015 15:07

If one is above 18 and chooses to engage in such an act, it is up to him/her as long us one doesn't use force and the like.

But what is the warrant under-age children will not be talked into or forced to such an act, averse to a natural trend?
Here in my country
Some foreigner running an NGO was found engaged in such an act . (Child Molestation)
Some kindergarten teachers were found practising such a crime. (Child Molestation)
A high ranking diplomat was killed here while trying to practise such an act on a young adult,who found such an act a perversion and an affront to his dignity. ( Attempt to Rape)

Though it is not good to generalize we have to be careful.Liberalizing things too much has its problem.
If you find it good keep it for yourself there.
I second African leaders like Museveni and Mugabe.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 8th Dec 2015 14:18

Oh, I don't know, Graham. Isn't the view from the bank just a different perspective to that from the water? I count myself as a canals enthusiast and I only tramp the towpaths - I've never owned a boat. Let's see what Luke comes up with.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 8th Dec 2015 13:45

A very interesting take on rebirth/reincarnation etc.
For me all the handing over should be done by the time mortality ends. The learning, the teaching, the advice, the role-modelling, the love, the humanity, the example that you hope to imbue the next generation (family and friends) with, for me is what our legacy really means.

I think there is an eternal blackness after death. you will have left your lights behind.

thought provoking as usual Stu.

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Stu Buck

Tue 8th Dec 2015 13:34

i suppose its how i picture death. the handing over of memories, money and objects seem so meaningless. i hope when i go i give something more!

so yes, spot on, it is about life and death and rebirth.

really glad you enjoyed it. i will write an inter vivos i think.

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Tim Ellis

Tue 8th Dec 2015 13:22

You have no reason to be afraid of people just because their sexual orientation is different to your own. We can all live together happily if we learn tolerance.

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Tim Ellis

Tue 8th Dec 2015 13:10

Another poem from my pamphlet "Speak The Unspeakable" It was first published in "Gringo on the Chickenbus" (Stairwell Books) You can google Golden Toad if you want the full sad story of this unfortunate animal. The poem is more-or-less true: my partner's mum has the glass toad in question, which we bought in Costa Rica some years ago, on her mantelpiece. You can get both books via my website (they'd make a perfect Christmas present for someone!)
http://www.birdbard.co.uk/bookshop.html

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Stu Buck

Tue 8th Dec 2015 10:40

this is great ray, especially the scent of phlox, which actually made me chuckle out loud. i have often been at the mercy of a coach full of japanese tourists so can sympathise.

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Stu Buck

Tue 8th Dec 2015 10:36

brilliant. this rings for me because this christmas will be the first one i have had off in years (ex-chef). i have everyone coming round and were having...a curry. i refuse to cook! this is very funny with a great last line.

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Stu Buck

Tue 8th Dec 2015 10:35

enjoyed this. this sort of rambling style with different forms in one piece requires 1) an interesting story/theme to keep the reader rapt and 2) a good writer. i believe you have both here. i enjoy how you write about fairly worn out themes (broken hearts and mean women) but communicate them in a manner that seems fresh and clever. also, you have a fine beard (which i may have mentioned before)

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 8th Dec 2015 09:49

Laureate for the Ramblers' Association surely?
It's a shame they couldn't find an emerging boater poet instead of an already published landlubber who by all accounts hasn't had much experience of the canals!
They've sold themselves short methinks.

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Tue 8th Dec 2015 08:21

Yes there has to be a limit for everything!

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J Graham

Tue 8th Dec 2015 04:36

Great poem:) I enjoyed reading it.

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John Coopey

Tue 8th Dec 2015 00:24

That's it, Graham.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wDRBDX3nt_o

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 8th Dec 2015 00:23

GS - Right! On "Tonight" with Cliff Michelmore - along with
the inimitable Fyfe Robertson - he of the wispy goatee
and battered little trilby.

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raypool

Tue 8th Dec 2015 00:03

That would put me off my organic tea cakes Harry, but thanks for the thought!

Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 7th Dec 2015 23:40

Robin Hall and Jimmy McGregor

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 7th Dec 2015 23:24

CONGRATULATIONS

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2015 23:13

I'm just re-reading "The Haj" by Leon Uris, Harry. Excellent historical fiction but also revealing about Arab psychology.
...and pluralist democracy will come when icebergs float down the River Jordan.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 7th Dec 2015 22:20

Alem,
Neatly - and economically - put. A timely reminder that democracy can be `liberalised` too much.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 7th Dec 2015 22:16

Alem,
For someone not writing in his native language your
poems are getting more poetically understandable every week.

(Maybe - in line seven - what awaits me)

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 7th Dec 2015 22:00


Ray,
You should have done Hever Castle and imagined big
fat Henry lusting after Anne Bolyne.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 7th Dec 2015 21:51

Stu,
An excellent example of what Shakespeare called `Keeping the middle of the road`

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 7th Dec 2015 21:36

If anyone wants to know the tasks that lie
before us over this problem, they should
carefully read Tony Blair`s (yes Tony Blair)
recent speech in Washington.

Our decision will inevitably (I.M.O.) lead to some
(hopefully United Nations) boots on the ground.
If ISIS are defeated and the populations return
the problem (given Turkey and Russia`s stance
towards Assam and the Kurds) will be who is going
to govern such a bewildering conglomeration of
different loyalties. one thing that seems very off
the table is any chance of pluralist democratic rule.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2015 16:25

I remember that, MC. It was 2 Scottish blokes with a guitar who were resident folky satirists on some 60's current affairs programme. Jimmy somebody or other and somebody else...

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th Dec 2015 16:02

"He's football crazy
He's football mad
But now his team keep losing
Poor Jose's looking bad!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th Dec 2015 15:50

Placing yourself upon a cliff
Should give you cause to wonder if
Sense has gone beyond recall -
Proving pride propels a fall!
:-)

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Anita Connor

Mon 7th Dec 2015 14:11

Well oldlancsman you have taken me down my memory lane even though mine was in reddish, Stockport. Loved your expression of what used to be. We definitely had the best time in our country.

Anita.Connor

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2015 13:30

It's the Hope that kills us, Graham.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 7th Dec 2015 11:29

Top 4 Top 4,Top 4rrrrrrrrrrrr

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J Graham

Mon 7th Dec 2015 03:31

Thank you for writing this.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Dec 2015 00:00

It's difficult to fathom, Greg, the turn-a-round from last season.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 6th Dec 2015 20:47

It grieves me to say it. But I tend to agree with you, John

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John Coopey

Sun 6th Dec 2015 20:14

Don't think the original lyrics of "You better come home, Speedy Gonzales" would have quite worked, Tommy.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sun 6th Dec 2015 20:12


Racist. "Go home"? Sorry I meant xenophobe. Oops J I forgot;-). T

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John Bastard

Sun 6th Dec 2015 18:29

Thank you stu.
ever had a thought that twists you tighter and tighter, coiling smaller and smaller the louder it gets until suddenly it comes rushing forth like a nosebleed?
Can't sleep. Can't eat. Don't really feel anything but the tightenbell ticking of a ratchet over your whole being?

Stillbourne Small, at your service.

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Tim Ellis

Sun 6th Dec 2015 17:24

There's a video of me performing this poem here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ktwSam2Z6sE

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Stu Buck

Sun 6th Dec 2015 16:10

this is excellent. really enjoying the work i have read. clearly a very talented writer.

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raypool

Sun 6th Dec 2015 15:59

Stu well done. To me maths and destruction come together as I was crap at maths. I also have a Webley 22 and it is tempting - but I love the simple creatures ! It awaits a finer destiny.
Wonderful poem , tells the story with great sweeps and its thought provoking about youth,and I enjoyed it.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Sun 6th Dec 2015 15:52

i named the ratchet in my skull
"Stillbourne Small, the catapault"

i think this is the finest piece of absurdity i have ever read.

this is great. a highlight of my day.

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raypool

Sun 6th Dec 2015 15:49

Yes David, I thought so too - but you know, anything goes!

Stu, An elevation of the art at the end I thought gave some credibility to a load of shit. Thanks both I knew you would see through it.

Ray.

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Stu Buck

Sun 6th Dec 2015 15:31

damn it, you stole my pun!

the last two lines are hilarious!

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Stu Buck

Sun 6th Dec 2015 15:30

thanks ian - i was hoping to disgust! not quite 'the wasp factory' standards though. glad you enjoyed it.

david - i have indeed used the same event before in a brief part of the poem 'sandy' but decided to zoom in as it were and flesh it out.

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Sun 6th Dec 2015 14:03

Hi OLM

I love your reminiscences, being an old Lancashire chap myself, though from Oldham. I used to teach at Maitland Street, of Skeffington Road, near you, in the 1970s. keep up the good work please! Have you recorded any of these on audio? If not, please do.

Cheers.

Julian

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Michelle

Sun 6th Dec 2015 13:12

Great write up Isobel, I'm sure it will be another fab night. Merry Christmas all!

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 6th Dec 2015 12:47

this is really good Stu - I sort of want to turn away from the picture you paint - but you watch until the end. That 2 line pay off at the end is chilling. Good stuff

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 6th Dec 2015 11:47

a man stands on the edge of a cliff
"I know what I shouldn't do
but I'm not sure what I should do"
QED

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Stu Buck

Sun 6th Dec 2015 09:53

this is one of the best things ive read in ages.so powerful and full of emotional punches. enough descriptive parts and detail to make me believe you (and therefore I) were there. its just brilliant writing. Daughters dry of tears died first is a fantastic line but there are so many. I really do love this.

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John Coopey

Sat 5th Dec 2015 20:38

Not disputing it, Tommy. That's because the West was the last to trample there. But its footfall was was not the heaviest just the most recent. And, of course, do you believe the problems of the region owe nothing to its Arab populations?

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