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Don Matthews

Tue 21st Jan 2020 21:58

I did go past Wigan one day
A long time ago in my past
They were celebrating World Spud Pie Day as I passed
Let's all sing hey diddle hey hey

Hey.

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Don Matthews

Tue 21st Jan 2020 21:35

While LMS is getting known
(By many WOLers it gets read)
Methinks many might be scared
Scared to enter, fear to tread

P'raps they scared of roller heights?
Prefer the dark and not the light?
Humour sense they lacketh so?
Here we go now doh see doh

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kimberly

Tue 21st Jan 2020 20:18

Well done!

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kimberly

Tue 21st Jan 2020 20:15

Great work here, Cait!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 21st Jan 2020 19:22

This is a fine poem, Cynthia. Best wishes to you and hope and trust you recover your energy after these January days. But those trees are a great consolation.

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Do.RoThy

Tue 21st Jan 2020 16:21

We r all set for the ride
Survivors of the big fire
Smoky though but tough to go
Rollers on the go, am old buckled up
Hey Donny dear, LMS park it getting cheers
It's slowly picking up name n fame on Wol
Way to go, way to go....common let's set go

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John Coopey

Tue 21st Jan 2020 14:17

I heard you were on your way, Kevin. I got out just in time!

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d.knape

Tue 21st Jan 2020 13:59

So brief a life
it did not last
it went too fast
too soon we pass.

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kJ Walker

Tue 21st Jan 2020 13:06

Are tha' stalking me John. I went to notcutts (Featherston) on Saturday. First time I'd been in over a year. And yes I did have a scone. Very nice it was too.

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Don Matthews

Tue 21st Jan 2020 08:40

Which is why I said 'sorta' - vacay.. dot dot dot. Poetic license Trev... Or licencious to be pedantic...

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Martin Elder

Tue 21st Jan 2020 08:23

Thanks Andy much appreciated

and thanks to Nigel Rich and Keith for liking

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 21st Jan 2020 08:07

Vacation is amphibrachic - as is pedantic! ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 21st Jan 2020 07:24

Do not worry all is well
Our Roller's safe and ready
Will shoot to inbox when all primed
And get you out of beddy

Update report has just been posted
Look upon your screen
I'm sorry colour's not been used
Not colour-usage keen

I've never ever seen so many
Exclamation marks
Can you hear the Roller coming?
Bells a'ringing? Hark?

No. I can't either.....

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 21st Jan 2020 06:48

Thank you so much, Vautaw and Po.

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Don Matthews

Tue 21st Jan 2020 06:24

If you would like to join the Like-Minders Society (LMS) and ride our Rollercoaster round the Theme Park to stops of offbeat poetical interest please contact our Leader.

We specialize in all things fun and offbeat.

We also invite offbeat poets into the Park. Not being members of WOL they are grateful for the opportunities LMS offers to present their work.

Do you feel the need to add some fun to your poetry journey? If so, this is the place for you

Lucy L (Head of Publicity)


PS Despite our Leader having occasional flights of fancy we all like him. And he does a good job.


LMS Cast of Players

Thalia - Leader's Muse of Mirth
Lucy L - Head of Publicity
Ethel/Bert - Pensioner couple
Miss Bethel - Bert's kindy teacher (deceased)
Janet - Leader's alien spacecraft friend
Molly - Lucy's sister
Leader - me, LMS creator


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kimberly

Tue 21st Jan 2020 03:20

Thanks, Do! ?

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John Coopey

Tue 21st Jan 2020 00:50

Oo no, Brian. Scons are for the horsey set.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 20th Jan 2020 23:46

Love this one Jon. Thanks for sharing your beautiful art. ?????

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 20th Jan 2020 22:48

Yes, very easy to be taken as autobiographical. No offence meant. However, my comments are valid as is your piece. Being fat isn't about the food! It isn't about the food!

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Do.RoThy

Mon 20th Jan 2020 22:40

Great idea Don.....m just packing stuff, rides are ready, am all set to have loads of fun.

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Don Matthews

Mon 20th Jan 2020 22:34

Vacation is iambic (sorta)
Bummer's a trochee
Let's all go on holidays
Yippee trochee ee

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Do.RoThy

Mon 20th Jan 2020 22:27

Vacation, sounds so pleasing to a bummer, great idea .....I liked the idea.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 20th Jan 2020 22:20

See John, if you had my background you'd say 'scon' ...not 'scone'

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Don Matthews

Mon 20th Jan 2020 22:08

Trochee January trochee bummer
Trochee holiday here I cummer
Gonna get there inna jet plane
And there relax with my sweet Jane

Where's your trochee?....

??? Bummer!....

Where's your Thalia?.....

Shh...don't tell her....

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Don Matthews

Mon 20th Jan 2020 21:56

Thankyou Cynthia and Po. I am surprised there has not been more comments from others on this.......

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Trevor Alexander

Mon 20th Jan 2020 21:34

Thanks guys.

Yes Cynthia, a total fabrication - it started off as an exercise in trochee. ? I don't go on vacation till late March, although it will involve an airplane Mika.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 20th Jan 2020 21:30

Marie - when someone writes in the first person I naturally assume it's personal. Sorry to misunderstand.

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Marie

Mon 20th Jan 2020 21:02

Oh my god,this is a Poem just a Poem please dont assume my poems are me I write on a variety of subjects. I feel a little offended This is just a Poem nothing more

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Philipos

Mon 20th Jan 2020 18:58

Don - Droplets - thanks for the comment. Much obliged. P ?

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Andy N

Mon 20th Jan 2020 18:36

great piece here Alexandra.. always enjoy reading your work..

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Andy N

Mon 20th Jan 2020 18:34

excellent stuff Martin as always..

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 20th Jan 2020 18:09

You are very kind, Keith. Thank you.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 20th Jan 2020 16:33

I followed my daughter's example and joined her at Slimming World (other dieting organisations are available) and I'm currently on a three stones loss in 21 weeks. she has lost 5 stones over a year.

You have to be ready to go to a place like that and have a support structure too. Our group is like an AA meeting with Stand-up comedy, great fun!

Good luck.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 20th Jan 2020 15:51

Po - from a lyricist's point of view (or "lyrist" as Ira Gershwin might
describe the term), the sequence is A/A/B - A/A/B.
The arrangement is the business of (literally) the music arranger.
Variety can be found in many songs according to the style employed.
Cheers.
MC

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keith jeffries

Mon 20th Jan 2020 14:44

Jon,

This poems flows perfectly, it rolls off the tongue and caresses the mind. Beautiful words which are a delight to read.

Thank you for this

Keith

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 20th Jan 2020 14:22

Thank you, Brian.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 20th Jan 2020 11:24

Things to avoid...

MacDonalds
Greggs
KFC
Burger King
Kebabs
Chips
Coke
All sugary drinks
Chocolate
Cakes
Biscuits

How to achieve it...

When you go out don't take any cash or cards


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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 20th Jan 2020 11:03

A humorous, well-timed piece. I get the feeling it's a lampoon, not necessarily YOU. I may well be wrong, but it was my first impression.
The 'vacation 'bit is a real barb.

I love it!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 20th Jan 2020 10:42

Strong and true and eye-opening. Are you under medical care?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 20th Jan 2020 10:24

Splendid thoughts.

Is that a jar of fireflies? Beautiful photo - very imaginative. A real moment, or digitally contrived? I ask only because it is amazing.

Something about your work makes me think it comes from an Eastern mind. Could be wrong. Doesn't matter at all. Just a feeling.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 20th Jan 2020 10:20

Well considered; well said; much needed.

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Don Matthews

Mon 20th Jan 2020 07:04

January's drained my cash
Entertaining's done it's dash
Can't do no shopping, effect is drastic
Let's go on hollies, 'ray for plastic

What's that? I gotta pay it back?.....

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Don Matthews

Mon 20th Jan 2020 06:53

I will be back to craze you ASAP
Po

You certainly did in LMS Meeting 11 feedback.....

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kimberly

Mon 20th Jan 2020 03:51

Just don’t use an airplane for that vacation, some members here are against that sort of thing. All kidding aside, this was a pleasant poem. Enjoy the vacation.

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MM Taverner

Mon 20th Jan 2020 01:05

Thank you! I wrote this for friends who are both doctors. Hence, the title ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 20th Jan 2020 00:40

a good poem with the last line being something of a surprise, a pleasant surprise.

Thank you for this

Keith

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john short

Sun 19th Jan 2020 22:18

I notice this incorrect info has still not been removed. Liver Bards takes place at Ma Boyle's in Liverpool on the first Tuesday of every month. NOT THE THIRD MONDAY.

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Do.RoThy

Sun 19th Jan 2020 22:00

Hey Po, thx dear.....jus working to make secret dreams come true!

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d.knape

Sun 19th Jan 2020 21:57

They do.
but a few die-hards like me, still get the morning newspaper.
I would hate to see them go away completely.
Wouldn't we miss the paper
as much as the morning cup of coffee?
I still believe in tradition
long may it live.

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Philipos

Sun 19th Jan 2020 21:40

Vautaw - Moon Talk - thanks for commenting. Appreciated. P. ?

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