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Fri 17th Jan 2020 01:03

Thanks so much Jason❣️?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 17th Jan 2020 01:02

Writing on walls seems to be our lot in life John. I can’t think of a better pastime!

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Fri 17th Jan 2020 00:58

I agree Jason, and lucky for us, happy comes in various hues! Thanks for reading and commenting. I enjoy your poetry too!

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Don Matthews

Thu 16th Jan 2020 22:41

True.....

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keith jeffries

Thu 16th Jan 2020 21:54

Ruth,

I have read your poem again and also the comments of other poets. We all depend on the media for information about personages who we have never met personally so it is difficult to form opinions or judge. I welcomed a multicultural representation in the Royal Family to address their monochrome image. Race is not the issue but integrity is. If the head of state were to be black I would have no problem as a white old male (eternally despised) but I look beyond race to other qualities where decency, compassion and love come to the forefront.
Your poem has generated the interest I anticipated. Keep writing girl. Your words are good
Keith

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Thu 16th Jan 2020 19:54

As you say Mark we are all influenced by the press, TV, or increasingly these days by social media. But if you went away for a few months and had no access to these would you notice any difference? Probably not.

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Thu 16th Jan 2020 19:50

Doesn't make sense, but what does these days? Roll on Jan 31.

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Thu 16th Jan 2020 18:50

8/9 l recon. Cynthia I do hope not in your 30's.
???

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 16th Jan 2020 16:55

Whilst my own experience/memory of skiffle is somewhat limited
("Freight Train" among a few others), this seems to have been a
very interesting life, deserving of being marked beyond its musical
and literary borders.

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John Coopey

Thu 16th Jan 2020 16:52

Thanks for the comments, MC. And also for the Likes, Brian, Emer and Marina.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 16th Jan 2020 16:49

Consistent in the construction of its message - a good one!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 16th Jan 2020 16:35

You have to laugh at life's vagaries - or perhaps that should be vulgarities. Share a care?
I take issue with the saying about a trouble halved. More like a
trouble doubled!. But I'd rather share with a paid professional any day! ?

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kimberly

Thu 16th Jan 2020 15:28

Raven, first start with a spellcheck in any document editor. I could point them out to you but it would take less effort if you use software that is readily available.

I see your piece as poetic, lots of rhymes and artistic passion you put into it. I don't see the title needing a change.

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d.knape

Thu 16th Jan 2020 13:41

The greatest joy men always get
when finding money someone left
by hook or crook, by accident
cash quickly found is quickly spent!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 16th Jan 2020 12:08

Raj,

Are you still on line? I have seen nothing for weeks. I have always enjoyed your imput, so I'm being bold enough to ask if all is well with you. You have been much in my thoughts.

Cynthia

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John Coopey

Thu 16th Jan 2020 11:09

While it’s still here, Brian.

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Thu 16th Jan 2020 10:50

That's it John...milk the NHS for all it's worth!

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Don Matthews

Thu 16th Jan 2020 09:10

Yes I fell asleep halfway but that seems to be the gist of it

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Raven Anne Matthews

Thu 16th Jan 2020 09:09

Thank you both for your comments. I do welcome any constructive criticism as I feel I still have a lot room for improvement. With regards to the proofreading, you are very welcome to assist me in that matter as I am a lone amateur writer who has no contacts for such things... I have also changed the title of my piece to better suit your preference to my style of writing. But again I appreciate your comments. Thank you

Blessed be to you always
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Thu 16th Jan 2020 08:57

Don - I can't read it all, there's too much of it. But apart from creating designer breeds of domestic pets, the piece seems to focus on humans creating and changing habitats which in turn changes the behaviour of existing species.

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Don Matthews

Thu 16th Jan 2020 08:50

Brian

I found the following interesting (from which my comment came)

https://www.vox.com/science-and-health/2017/10/23/16317238/humans-create-new-species-biodiversity-extinction

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A Peterson

Thu 16th Jan 2020 00:43

Very inspiring. Thank you.

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Wed 15th Jan 2020 23:19

I'm seriously curious Don....we've created many new species? Explain please...

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Don Matthews

Wed 15th Jan 2020 22:51

While we have destroyed many species we have also created many new species. All is not doom and gloom.......

But nice short poem Trevor. My type......

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Don Matthews

Wed 15th Jan 2020 22:32

I'm a piece of clutter
Looking for a home
Kicked out by this woman
Made to flee, to roam

Looking for a kind man
Wanting me, nice clutter
Hug me, make me happy
Take me out the gutta

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keith jeffries

Wed 15th Jan 2020 18:22

MC.,

How true! My mother epitomised the 'Ideal Home Exhibition', forever fluffing the cushions, dusting and re arranging, whereas Dad dropped his newspaper in the hearth, picked up his pipe and bellowed healthy clouds of tobacco smoke upon us all. A home is a place to be lived in, not a display zone. I am glad to be free of the smoke but support the notion that a home is a dwelling place and not some sort of window for so called ideal living.
Bring on the clutter.

Thanks for the comment
Keith

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 15th Jan 2020 17:52

That is one my favourite things I've read in a really long time.

J. x

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 15th Jan 2020 17:50

"Passion, love and happily ever after,"
I believe in those, but we get to choose our definition of, "Happy."
Love this.

J. x

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raypool

Wed 15th Jan 2020 16:49

Ah Brian a philosophical view thanks. Most schools get bad press in the end especially academies. Wot can you say?

Thanks Don repetition is one answer. A curse by any other name. .

Mark. It's simple economics i suppose. Accountants United.

Thanks all for commenting.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 15th Jan 2020 16:04

"Away with minimalism, do I hear you mutter?
Let us create and covet our clutter!"
Personally,, i've always identified with the description -
Organised chaos.
But it seems to be a male thing that engenders the opposite
response in the tidy female frame of mind. Maybe that's why many
married men have to retire to a shed in the garden?! ?.

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keith jeffries

Wed 15th Jan 2020 15:03

Martin, thank you for this. Clutter is a part of who we are; the baggage we carry and a reminder to us of times past and their significance in our lives. Keith

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d.knape

Wed 15th Jan 2020 13:57

Musty lost corners
full of musty old books.

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Don Matthews

Wed 15th Jan 2020 13:30

To me this is not poetry. It is like the page out of a book. I'm not even enticed to begin. It is far too long. But that's just me.

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kimberly

Wed 15th Jan 2020 13:12

This is a very beautiful piece straight from the heart.

I would advise to proofread, fix some typos and this will be a much stronger piece.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 15th Jan 2020 12:50

Dictators
Playwrights
Authors
Rock Stars

from a place they come
equal seems the word
but when becoming famous
we don't seem to meet
on that scale at all.

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Martin Elder

Wed 15th Jan 2020 09:11

There is certain parts of me that likes minimalism but like you I am more at home with my clutter after all who wants to end up being part of a display in an a gallery or perhaps in my case a museum.
Nice one Keith

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Martin Elder

Wed 15th Jan 2020 09:05

You have nailed Ian
Nice one mate

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keith jeffries

Wed 15th Jan 2020 08:34

Don,

Thanks. We are kindred spirits.

Keith

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Dalan Jahan

Wed 15th Jan 2020 03:59

Thanks

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 15th Jan 2020 03:20

Fascinating poem Alexandra. That first line is golden!

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Don Matthews

Wed 15th Jan 2020 02:37

I know exactly how you feel Keith:

Modern caffs are clinical
Minimal as can be
Nothing on the walls as such
So boring to me

Hillbillys is the cafe
I spend all of my time
Bohemian, picture-covered walls
Inspires all of my rhyme

Helped by my sweet Muse of Mirth Thalia....

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keith jeffries

Wed 15th Jan 2020 00:28

Dear All,

Thank you for your comments which nearly all included the word minimalism. I suppose they thought they had reached some point of design purity when in actual fact they produced a blandness which has not stood the test of time. When I compare the room I describe with my own sitting room I know where I would rather spend my time. A room festooned with pictures and portraits, a piano, endless book shelves and ornaments galore with table lamps and a magnificent standard lamp not to mention a fire screen which can be converted into a card table. Death to minimalism. Long live clutter.

Thank you again
Keith

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John Coopey

Tue 14th Jan 2020 23:16

I'm sure you're right, MC.

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Don Matthews

Tue 14th Jan 2020 22:24

I like this one Do

The line

'I scan the memories recorded audio files'

is good......

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Don Matthews

Tue 14th Jan 2020 22:12

Jingle jangle I'm a little bell
Jangle jingle I'm dinging in reverse
Jingo jungle wot's going on?
Jungo Bungo ditty's getting worse

Ding dong bong dong....

Thankyou for inspiration Ian...

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Don Matthews

Tue 14th Jan 2020 22:03

My dress is oh so minimal
It stretches to my knees
I like to wear it oh so short
So I can the boys tease

My furnishings on top?
Not much, they show a lot
I'm little Spartan Sally
Spartan Sally wot?.....

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 14th Jan 2020 20:05

I can remember this sort of interior design being popular some decades ago...the days when David Bailey made photography
a trendy thing and Mary Quant raised hems - and "ahems" - in her
personal feminine (NOT feminist!) quest for "minimalism". ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 14th Jan 2020 19:58

Pain comes in a variety of forms, some more hurtful and more lasting than others. But the irony exists in the awareness given by age of
the susceptibility to the occasional violent frailties that age itself can create in the context of human relationships.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 14th Jan 2020 19:49

Wondered where you'd got to. Thought you may have been nicked
on some protest or other! ?

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Zeeshan Manzoor

Tue 14th Jan 2020 17:38

hi, I read your article I prefer this such a great kind of post.


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